Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Don’t know if Literotica lets me post links, but try this. You need an account to see her stories. And have the correct filters turned on/off. If you don’t have it set to show explicit stuff I don’t think you’ll be able to see her posts.

https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/cunwitch/profile

“We’ve got all these dangerous and immortal monster girls with eons of military strategy and tactics at our beck and call, but in the absolute worst case scenario, we have a horny rabbit girl.”

Graff is the most dangerous one of all.

Nice start, of all writers on Lit, you are one of the few I can see pulling off this kind of story.

Hot!!! This series is definitely a must read! 5 stars!!!

@Voxman314 - thanks for saying 😊 Emily

Love the story, keep up the creative writing.

Chucked in the worst way 👀

This series continues to be a “must read” - very enjoyable, and plenty of threads to keep track of. Keep up the good work!

Seriously let's count it off. Turned on the majority of the towns women, took the head wife and his daughter, took his mother with eyes for his sister, has I believe the blacksmiths wife primed and ready to go, and you're talking about Greg losing his soul in a dungeon dive. Also...

Have you read the story Hank? One would think that after 61 chapters that you would understand what it's about and what Gred/Roka is. Lose his soul... This guy

So It's like a disease? You act like an animal if you don't have sex regularly?

He's in over his head. I get it. Completely makes sense for him to be anxious so often.

I can't wait for more!!!

Surprisingly good.

Re: the afternotes: before I started reading Literotica, stories online I read were mostly newsgroups and sites that accumulated newsgroup stories, so it was inevitable that I would run across Trek slash. There were some fun group things, multiverse stuff, the...

Your writing paints a vivid picture. That is so much better than just reporting what is happening as too many authors do. I look forward to next Wednesday and the next chapter.

I am a very big fan. I am disappointed that sometimes the story is stretched.

this game run could have been finished in 1-2 chapters. It is still not done and I hope it will not stretch for many more chapters

@SathurnFox, I get it. I know even a dollar a month can be more than some people can do. And if it makes you feel any better, keep an eye out for it in the next few days. I put it up for a bit as early access for my Patreons, but then I'll be submitting it to Literotica, probably...

Hey AE,

By this point he should be 15 years old by our standards. 16 by the standards of feudal Japan.

"That was harsh!"

Yeah it was. I wrote this chapter to sort of disillusion people of the fantasy of being a ninja.

Shinobi had to do some awful crap. And yes, I was ruthless in this...

This story was hilarious 😆!!!

zero immersion, but your previous chapters were chock full of story so the smutreaders were due a good chapter :).

Oops. I just realized I ended this chunk in a terrible spot. See my profile for links to more chapters. I'm submitting my next chunk to lit shortly.

A beginning of another awesome tale!!

That was harsh!

On another note, I'm having trouble keeping up with the passage of time. How old is he at this point?

Nice. Not the standard fare. Look forward the next chapter.

Off to an interesting start, I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing!!!

that was funny

Quite a good first chapter.

I only read it for the name Wade Wilson aka deadpool.

I'm actually looking forward to more.

This interlude really was excessive.

Not seeing how it moves the story.

Unless you intend Greg to lose his soul.

What a chapter!!!

Interesting start. Thanks

Good story. I especially love the spontaneous orgasms girls around the MC experience whenever he transforms.

I had initially thought the title 'Divine Gambit' was wrong, as there hasn't been anything divine so far, but there's a hint of it in this chapter I think.

Looking forward...

The story is always amazing.. i have been hooked since tge frist part i read. But please to prevent us from been bored waiting a year cycle for each book. Can't you just make the chapters come in longer time sequence. Say for instance 2 chapters a month that way.. we already edge...

I'm happy that a story on literotica talks of vegetarianism.

He finally remembered the password from the account. Anyway, glad to see you back, I hope the next chapter comes sooner than this one.

This is a cute, silly and fun read. Great characters with interesting interactions. You have a wonderful imagination and it definitely shows in this story. Thanks for posting it.