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Add one more story on knot county :)

Eat yer damn veggies? Spoken like a true Mom, Miss Annabelle! Future me has come back to re-read the HFHM series and noticed that bit in the outro…one more thing to love about your writing. As I am working my way back towards 2024 I’ve picked up on a few errors here and there but...

It's really good. I wish there was more!

This was one of the best chapters. Really enjoy the battle and thought you put into it. You really do a lot of research into the story line. Keep up the good work.

I loved Rikki-Tikki-Tavi as a child. You are an excellent author, well able to evoke emotions and write interesting tales! I very much have enjoyed reading this story and those leading up to it!

Oof. Yeah, I think this is where I dropped the story last time I started it. Was headed to the annoyingly dramatic already, but a cad molesting and abusing her doesn’t equal a mating mark in any kind of canon. It’s just infuriating. Thomas obviously should have been eliminated.

Fantastic writing and storyline, even if the characters of Beth and Velvet are just getting more stupid. Beth seems to be just more a whore, never able to just say no to cocks. Velvet's behaviour is so silly she should just be Leeds stupid pet. Doesen't got much active braincells,...

Please get a proofreader! The story has good bones but it's so poorly written that it was difficult to read and enjoy.

Great short story!

Crumbs it’s the TARDIS!! :-)

Best one yet in this Jack series. Thank you.

Thank you for honoring those great servicemen.

That was an interesting story. I wonder if Dana is going to have sex with Mike again. Maybe it can bring her back to life permanently.

Has "Stray Cat Strut" lyrics in my head. lol Been a long time since I heard that song.

Wow, why do I feel so emotionally attached to a half spider woman, and feel a sense of deep loss. Well written. Thanks x

HONK!

Please, Please may I have some more.

I'm not american, but I am a military history nerd, USS Arizona showing up gave me profound chills. Fabulous chapter in so many ways.

An outstanding series! 👏

I just imagine Death showing up to the Arizona and giving that line from Battleship, "I need to borrow your boat". A little deus ex machina, but appropriate. Don't imagine the boys on the Arizona ever thought they'd end up fighting a Frenchman though...

Loved it. Once his new life became clear their happiness shined through. Don't worry about it being short. Keep writing, I look forward to your next.

Boy am I glad I reread this! Had kinda forgotten some details, not to mention all the potential for plots in the main series. Since Aileen is off to Wyoming, but has attracted the Orders attention, maybe she’ll reach out to Dana and Lily for their next DH adventure? And pleeeeeaaaaase...

I can’t imagine the research you have put into this, not only the magical beings, but the science, technology, history..keep it up. Wonderful.

Dammit, there aren't enough stars to give this chapter. This is a site for weirdos to read other weirdos' weird smut stories; no fair making me cry. Twice!

I would love a continuation of A Close Companion with another woman encountering our protagonist, Todd, a few years after the first novel. We could see him having grown more confident and could meet Bailey and the therapist again. See them having grown more comfortable in their position...

Fantastic story!

You keep writing chapters and I think we will ALL keep reading them.

Aww.

Enjoyed it, just hope we don’t have to wait as long for next chapter

This is a great short story keep writing you have talent

I lol'd many times. The security team has to be my favorites!

Minus the grammatical errors a great story

OMG such a fantastic story. I hope you come back to it and write some more. Thank you, you are an excellent writer.

Mr ANONYMOUS- From Garry putz - I have the GREATEST respect for those who fought, died and still fight for both America and Australia. My only concern is that they are always REMEMEBERD with the respect and honour they deserve. When writerannabelle brought to my attention that the...

I kept waiting for a story.

Backstory!!! God(desse)s, I really loved this.