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Great story!! I liked it a lot. I thought they would be back together. I never saw the high fastball coming. It makes you wonder how long and how many times she fucked around before he caught her. I won't even ask if the kids are his. As long as He got the happy ending, I'm cool....

This was so much fun to read, I was genuinely excited to get back to it and finish the story. I like the way you’ve balanced the fun and free part of sex as well as the deeper emotional part. This is my new favourite story :)

anonymous, there's no STDs because this is fictional escapism.

1794, thanks for sharing this old-school story of a promiscuous slutwife and her cuckold.

Fantastic story. Great way to end it.

Thanks for sharing.

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You mentioned‘Sleep Bambi’ - this is an really old hypnosis file and yes those files listen to them regularly will change your mind

Great tale and this hopefully will just be the first chapter …. And the master walking out and not breeding the whore, the act she is so in need to...

So the Harajin are not trade to be smart, just trained derpy killers. Cause that is a shit plan, the fighters in the streets could just as easily have the potion at their damn inn/hotel so killing them makes it harder not easier

Holy fuck. I’m pretty sure this is the hottest D/D story I’ve ever read on here

Very good story!

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Nope. Bite the cunts cunt. Fuck her harder than she does you. Use your fucking imagination. HURT THE CUNT. Then buy a fucking gun and blow her brains all over your husband.

I Liked both these MILF cruise stories, nice links between the two stories. Thanks

This is great! Can't wait for Part 3.. please??

Sounds like divorce is coming soon.

Jo jumped the shark later on, she was nutty during the entire story but she became self-destructive at the end. Wish you paid off the threat of her contracting an STD. She read like a yappy dog and just needed to go away.

good drama though and a fun read.

Thanks, good advice.

obviously written by a man

There was no remorse for love lost. Shall we believe that Sharon was so shallow that 30 years of marriage after marrying her childhood sweetheart was replaced only with lust for black lovers. It left me feeling unsettled.

Thanks for your writing,

What about slapping that damn Court shrink, who was against the husband's position the whole way? Doesn't the shrink know about DNA and when it can be obtained? Shrinks are MD's first. This faux-pas dropped one full star.

He might get replaced by Ted soon, if Ted is willing to share her, too.

IDK. This is her third relationship where her lover stripped her naked and dominated her. Once could be a mistake, and twice a weird coincidence, but a third one? I'm starting to see a pattern...

Another dead account.

Loving both the short stories series, something different.

I do think it would help to give a motif for those involved . Maybe her husband doesn't pay her any attention anymore, or they didn't marry for love, they married because she gotten pregnant. She could have caught him peeing...

I hope Montgomery ends up giving a girl something Wolfe can't.

This is really good.

Thanks for sharing.

Love Blake the cock-sucking cum-slurping slut!

Thanks for your writing,

story was weird for a while but ended up enjoyable.

Epilog was a bit quick.

My unprompted epilogue.

Chris is discharged from the mental hospital, fully understanding why she tried to end her life, the pain she caused and how to cope with her guilt.

With Lindy's knowledge and...

Sounds almost like a fairy tale at the end, and hard to believe. But a nice story.

Hot hot hot! Suck that huge cock!

Brilliantly hilarious! Verrrry well done.

So fun & love the physical descriptions! Cock-sucking straight ahead!

too many "final warnings", otherwise it was good drama.

Jan’s lawyer would have demanded part of the settlements.

I am sure it has its market, but like your first reviewer said there would be too much evidence not to convict, oh and as for her "The pictures would be up forever," threat, one public court case and as long as there was enough doubt, (even if she was found not guilty) backed by a...