Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

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Thank you for the story. Age doesn't have to be an issue; once I was in love with a beautiful woman 18 years my senior, another with a woman 18 years my junior. I felt lucky in both cases!

somewhere east of Omaha

Great story please write more. The new one's you write them make them extemely talking dirty & fucking like no end in sight. Thnk-you

Thank you for your feedback anonymous user but, as it stands, I see criticism that is not constructive; therefore I'd like to ask, if you could, to please elaborate on the issues you brought up.

Why was the story poorly written? Was it confusing?

When did the flow of the story change,...

constant POV changes... the mark of someone that wants the reader constantly jarred out of immersion, or simply has no clue what 3rd person means.

Delightful!

It really needs a follow up. Hint hint....

I love your stories!

Really, really good story!!!!!!!!!

Five stars! A well written, teasing and erotic story. Mature, 45? LOL, put that in the MILF category. A story no doubt so many of us that have punched our tickets as a lover, wife and mother will relate to with a momentary smile, acknowledging our secret. Unlikely lovers, each...

I loved your story Beth! Kind of exciting with a let down ending. Hope there is a part2 in the works!

Brought back memories of my youth and the short one weekend tryst I had with a neighbor lady.

Nice storyline.

Wonderful....stop the "ugly-sexy"...sounds like she is a beautiful person.

Love the story and the pace! Char is sexy too

I Liked both these MILF cruise stories, nice links between the two stories. Thanks

Nice story, but it it is always risky when only one spouse gets the outside sex. I agree with the previous Anonymous’ comment that “even if he has to pay” for sex - with the wife’s knowledge and approval, of course.

You never fail to amaze me with your writing.

Great story! Poor David / Lucky David. If there's a part #2, it should be interesting as hell. Cheers. Frankie

Second time I've read this story. Excellent.

Wow, loving the direction you're going with this series. Very sexy.

loved the story but really need a part 2 to finish it off

FYI you seem to have an unclosed italics section on page 3 that's set most of the page italic.

Defin 6*, but personally i don't need so many mechanical details. The romance and the character building are sexier than specific fluids or used condoms. I'm a bit like Houston and Trina describe themselves. So give us more of that.

Laughed outloud at the farmer milking the cow bit

What a wonderful story! I very much enjoyed the well-developed characters in this particular novella. Both of parts with Linda and Sam are the very best I have read in Literotica. Keep writing. You have a wonderful talent as a writer.

2nd that need a part 2

Really, really good story!!!!!!!!!!!

I enjoyed your well written story. Thank you!

Well, I guess your main characters found their comfort zone, and limits ? Myself, I would continually be worried about crossing the line between exhibitionism and cheating, especially after having been cheated on by previous wife. Maybe some people can walk that line and enjoy it,...

Very, very good story!!!!!!!!!!!

Loving how you are so very proper. But give in to your passion and don’t hold back. The scene in the toilet is very erotic in many ways .. I can imagine it!

Such a very delightful introduction!

A beautiful tale about how a woman used males for their entertainment.

I like stories from a women's perspective.

There better be another chapter the story is great

Abrupt and unfinished ending to an interesting story. Also there is no word plutonic. Platonic was meant. But a second chapter would make this way better. Intriguing and original ‘fight’ scene.

Strangely and powerfully unsettling. But very well done. Thanks, I think, for your time and effort.