Erotic Horror Story Comments

A very good story, I liked it a lot.

I love being immersed in the culture. The family. So erotic and threatening. Perfection

You do voodoo

Very well. You focused on the horror aspect, to the benefit of the tone of this story I thought. The storyline wasn’t wrapped in a tidy bow, but there were enough elements of society left in place to make a go of the farm. They had engineering, medical care and agriculture....

@Anon,

Hentai images, primarily. I wish there was more in the Clit Box community, but I guess that's why I'm here, haha.

I’m enjoying your version of The Walking Dead. Reveal the saboteur please.

Well the first days are the hardest days, don't you worry any more

'Cause when life looks like easy street, there is danger at your door

Think this through with me, let me know your mind

Wo-oh, what I want...

Thank you! There will absolutely be more stuff like this in the future. And it won't always be written like this, either. I made this on a whim, bored and horny. But sex magic and predicament stuff are a big yes from me. C:

As hot as this was, given a week or two to think about it, you'd think Selene would've chosen a less risky target. A married man with a kid IN THE HOUSE, his wife is due back in a few days, and his job is expecting him to complete a project soon? Better to have drawn this out like...

Love it. Where did you get the idea for this from?

You said it yourself …..

“ Angie said, slowly. "It was all bullshit “ “

Interesting concept.

Kinda dark but cool and original. There will be more stories with kinky predicaments and sex magic?

As an ugly duckling who never became a swan, I can relate to most of this story.

Next part please

I'm really invested I hope that I'll find the next part on ur page if not I hope u publish it soon as it was a really good story

However, you had bald ladies in this story. Wouldn't mind seeing more of them in your other ones ;)

I've come back to your Literotica page once a year every year since this was published to check if you would ever come back to continue this. Excited to see new activity

“Yes, for the love of God.” Well, the committed adultery, and the wages of sin are death, so yes, absolutely, he killed them for the Live of God.

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“Ah! Back in the days before internet, before social media, before cell phones. Life was so simple, so local then. No instant nationwide...

Interested to see where this is going!

This was just a one-off, not part of any planned series. Cannibalism isn't any fetish I have either, but I thought it worked well for the story.

Cannibalism is not my thing, but I would love is bald characters started popping up in your other stories.

Excellent story. Great twist at the end. Could have come from the Twilight zone the way you developed it.

Really hope this doesn't turn into another cuck story. Has fairly decent potential.

This is one of the best BDSM stories I have ever read. The flow of the story was really good, the timelines have been wonderful. The shuffle between past and present, the complex thought of a long time isolated prisoner has been well written. It started and ended in that small prison...

holy shit

💕

I agree with IJS0904's critique. I'm a sucker for the haunted house genre, and you have many different paths you could take this. Cheers!

Good story with a nice mystery that was solved nicely. Guess there was both two women and not two women as I wondered for the first chapter. Ray not sure how to feel about him, sleeping with a married woman even in a dead marriage seems pretty terrible but if not for that he'd be...

Coraline. Found it.

Very interesting. Can't wait for more

Great start! Eagerly awaiting the next instalment.

Thank you, excellent writing!

I'm looking forward to where you take this story. You've set the stage, and we will see what happens to our protagonist. Nice start and excellent writing.

Great story!

If I could not access this story for whatever reason... I would weep.

What movie is this inspired by?