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I never got that lucky removing snow from neighbor's yards. Would have been so much more fun if one of the three ladies came on like this

I can say I've touched the northern end of the Appalachian trail but reading this wish I could have done more. Beautiful setting. Meeting the right people at the right time to allow him to end in the potential long term relationship. Well put together. Agnes needs to stow her righteous...

Cheeky and fun. Love it

Different from most stories keep it up

Thanks @arisingsiren!

Hey there Dr Max, I think your faithful followers deserve a story about the prize awarded to the winner could it be a night out with Zephyrine a meal funded by the rest of the players, say, ten pounds total might buy a two course meal in a restaurant in 1957 (probably buy two coffees...

Great start

Nicely paced as the sex escalates. The “back and forth” 1st person easily followed/easily imagined. At first, thought you should have/could have lengthened each first person moment, but doing so would have detracted from the escalation you created.

Someone has been reading the incel bible today. Say what you want about my writing but do not question the beauty of the ladies of the asian subcontinent.

not a bad cuckquean story

The Reptiles are back!! Wonderful short story!!!

Thank you for the story. Kept me intrigued and hard all the way t

Yes! Great story! Time to stop fucking around and hook up with Mandy.

I've enjoyed your story! Unfortunately, you've not been able to produce Chapter 5. Let's hope a burst of inspiration comes your way pretty soon and we can find out how our loving duo is coming along!

Muh dick !

Thanks @hardrider! And hey now, she has to keep her house in order hahaha

I believe they were referring to the "A-Spot" aka the anterior/posterior fornix located in the vaginal canal, it's actually to the sides of the cervix. At least, that's how i took it.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vaginal_fornix

Excellent story. Would have loved to read about the after party shenanigans.

Nicely written and hot. My favorite phrases are

“not even for decorative purposes“ and “signature silent, shaking orgasms.”

Hurry up on Part 3!

Obsessed! Please give us more 🥰🙏

Sadly I have lost a lot of my older stories. My DeviantArt profile and Reddit have been suspended too

Pretty freaking hot. And it felt fast, but semi-plausible at the same time. I'm very hot read

Aw...virgin no more....

Nice ending...But she didn't cum with Tom....Call in Jane!

Incredibly hot 🔥. Your story doesn't describe any characters or life story. It's just a very detailed description of intense sensual fucking. And that works 😉. The story maybe needs more specific situation and to be less generic. Please keep posting!

I Love that Story, i hope you will continue.

Good premise.

But the sex is sooooo rushed.

Lacking in details. Just saying it's cunnilingus, for example, and quickly mentioning tongue and mouth on pussy simply isn't erotic.

Sadly I gave up on page 2.

Three stars.

She needs more spa adventures. Also she should be in a situation where she's brought to a group on a platter with food on her then laid on the table for them to eat off of her. Also, maybe it's time for her to have

experience a 1 on 1 trip away with Barry some toys and a butt plug...

Thanks for caring enough to comment - even you, Anonymous #1. <3

Her ex needs to call the newspapers and find a real woman.

loved it. want a sequel. also what's with the king?

An interesting premise, and I’m eager to see where this goes. And for the sex as well.

Can anybody please make their own continuation of this series?

I'm sure yours will be great.

Josie is right about the whole Tori thing. Ryan is wrong. It's nice that he wants to help her, but she doesn't deserve it, and I hope he realizes his other newer friends are far better friends than Tori ever was.

But, I suspect you'll keep dragging them together for some reason I...

5'10" ginger with a micropenis. Of Course they get all the hot girls. Comically ridiculous.