Loving Wives Story Comments

Extra eye patch...love it

I liked this touch of reality.

My new favourite story. I love true romance. Nobody ever captured true love like this author did with these two wonderful people. Besides being shown to be so much in love, the characters of both of them was captured brilliantly by a wonderful author. Two minor complaints, this wasn't...

Really wonderfully done.

I just re-read this for at least the fourth time, possibly more. I have to agree with both “dazzer15,” and “ocker53.” I think I definitely wouldn’t have stayed the night, and gone home right after Traci went into the asshole’s room. Why add to my own humiliation? However, after...

Fuck them all. DECEITFUL WIFE, DECEITFUL LIFE. \How soon will she try similar shit, claiming it's simply a one off. BULLSHIT. With all the entitlement laws for women, Simply walk away , take your half, and let her file under abandonment.

FUCK HER.

Nice story. It is good enough to have earned a proofreader - a few silly spelling mistakes there, presumably from using computer aided dictation.

Five stars ... you are hilarious ... write more

Nice story,

Thank you for sharing

Oh mr forensicfossil palatine has never ever been a country the Palestinian people and people like you like to make out that Isreal stole the land from them when that is total bs the land has always belonged to the Israelites never to the Palestinian people.

Pretty good. Luckily she finally got enough money to buy a 38 snub nosed pistol. She had a good idea who was causing her problems. Having nothing to lose, she tracked her ex husband down and popped fore caps in his worthless ass. They held the funeral early on the next Saturday.

You are a very good writer on here.... this story Erin should have suffered a little more IMO ... write more....

Marc was written too cold. For some star who likes to take women away from their husbands he lacks of emotions during the sex and after. No talking, no badmouthing of Jim, no ego boost for himself. That doesn't add up.

I like it! Thank you for sharing.

Realistic you say? Wife stops having sex, all interaction after that is simply hall sex. You see each other in the hall and they both say fu, hall sex. Yeah, that's the way I did it.

She gave off the wrong impressions to the arsehole chasing her, mild flurting, missing her husband. It gave the arsehole chasing her an opening and he used it. If she had not been so easily open to another man it would have never gone wrong. She unwittingly helped him. The...

What a great story line. Bob sure is a lucky guy.

Learn how to write dialogue. It's really not that hard and makes you look less like a junior high kid sneaking onto an adult site. I mean, the story would still suck...

Josh got played. That's the bottom line. Emma already had a clearly established sexual group dynamic with her friends. The comments they were making about her already had Josh translating the writing on the wall. Emma is the group's bicycle. Emma's hot tub activities only served to...

As always people read these stories and then moan at the theme... don't read this section then! :D

I enjoyed this a lot - had to cum back to it after getting half way through, I hope the story continues.

5 Stars on this one from GW . I hear That Julie has a cousin in Florida named Debbie . I also hear she was married to a guy called the " Angel of Death " but they got divorced .

Vicarious living through sports is pathetic, innit?

...A life well lived... helping a battered ex was what a "white knight" would do. It seemed bending over backwards, and with a new wife who could be jealous. Both spouses are good, compassionate people, so they went forth and multiplied.

Amazing series, I really hope you continue on! You've managed to create three good characters, and the growing need in Sarah is spot on.

What a satisfying revenge! Brilliant and original plot. It all hangs together like a Swiss watch. Crisp, well-paced writing. No pointless digressions, boring description of financial and legal strategies, boring descriptions of vanilla sex, or any of the other writing sins which...

The blossoms do bloom, the sun also rises. Let the halcyon days come like a warm spring. Good things to good people? (Clouds on the horizon?)

Second time through to examine Laura more closely.

She seemed to just have been a truly rotten person at the point of her affair.

Someone that was simply a disgusting and unforgivable backstabber.

She served some penance but it's interesting to speculate if she will ever have a...

I had this going as a four star story, until I realized it was heading to just another "Mexican Whitehouse" ending. That workout trope dropped it to three.

Glad the Steelers beat the Black and Silver.

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JPB NOT BOB

For some reason I liked this...

Don't tell anyone.

This story was just plain boring. The fact that the husband could drone on and on with his morality lectures would put anyone to sleep. I guess we shouldn’t expect much from a grown man that still believes in Noah’s ark.

Wonderful story and series. Everybody enjoyed themselves. Me included. Thank you x

Read this gem, again, with my wife of nearly 54 years, who loved it even more than I did. We both wish we could give it more than 5*.

It’s barely an outline. Come back when you’ve written a full story, not this little stub.

Sorry, no real ending, which spoilt the story.

And in one fell swoop one author ruins another author’s story. Some stories don’t need an addendum. She was a whore plain and simple her husband found out and ditched the bitch, there was nothing to add, there was never going to be a single thing she could do to get him to accept...