Poetry Comments & Feedback

Discovered your work through reading another author; glad for that. Very moving, thought provoking erotic poem. Loved the “turn” and the complementary nature of your lines around strengths and weaknesses. Beautiful poem.

Liked the title — perfect for the mix of metaphorical images you create. Any number of lines so captivating “…like twisted sea dreads…”. Last two stanzas put smile on one’s face. Not sure why FUCK is capitalized — curious; certainly does not detract. Like your poetry.

Lovely.

Beautiful

“caressed and kissed“

I love it.

I like the air of submission in this poem.

Wow! I love the ocean theme. Beautiful sex.

such vivid imagery . beautiful.

So erotic xxx

You're writing is still incredible

Thank you I did write one the other day care to here it?

Thank you Satyr61. A friday evening rambling :) Glad you liked.

What a truly beautiful poem, Kat. It touched my heart xxxxx

Good!

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B reakin' on CNN!!!?

D onald got Spanked....

S tormy testified Prez Trump:

M ama roasted his Red Rump!?

@Migbird -- I had to re-read that line, too. I took it as meaning, "She says things to me, about myself, that make me think 'how can she possibly know that?' She knows things about me I didn't even know myself."

Thank you 💋 🔥

its lovely

Pretty close to the last one I read. Do you really like your dom to punt your nuts so diligently? I mean... I have no problem with it.

Succinct and direct. Well, what can you really say when you're writhing on the floor with your testicles up in your throat?

You have a nice feel for meter and rhyme.

Beats me. I'm glad I don't live next to one of those things.

Have you ever seen the movie, "The Quiet Earth"? It's an obscure apocalyptic Australian piece. You might like it. Thought provoking.

I think sometimes the living do see the dead. I like the poem, though.

Wow, that is naughty

I support this

Nice

Cool. I did an acrostic and found the technical aspects on this site to be overwhelmingly challenging. I finally posted it as an attachment from WORD which worked better. it's hard to emphasize the first letter in each line for readers who don't know what you're doing.

How Biblical and so inspiring! Love it. The whip is ready.

I like this one a lot. Well done, DampKitten.

Very hot and I like the large stanzas.

I love how regularly and relentlessly you produce excellent poems, Mark.

Nicely done.

Thank you dear Meli’…

Sometimes you just have to look around😊

Like very much; rolls off the lips/flows. Intrigued by one line: “She tells me things she cannot know.” Curious - what cannot her lover know in the moment? Thanks for this poem; one way I love your poetry.

I like the energy of this, building the sexual tension with a crescendo as the poem progresses.