- BDSM
- Unexpected Halloween
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Click hereHardly moving myself using my hands to ram her head onto my cock and then pulled it back. I worked up a pace and soon a tap touched my arse. I pulled out watched while Beth took a breath and I plunged in again. I was using her head like a rag dolls moving it violently back and forth raming balls deep on every stroke. I did this for 30 seconds then pulled right out.
Beth said, 'I can hold my breath twice as long giive it to me!' and so I did
I gave her 5 one minute violent deep throat sessions. On the sixth I got to the short strokes. I wanted to pull out but Keith standing behind me said 'Go for it James! I strained forward and again was Balls deep. My ejaculation pulsed and pulsed. And again. I groaned as I pulsed again. And still Beth had not touched my arse. I just had to pull back and out.
Felicia was there to suck me into her mouth and Keith was there to take my place. He was brutal with his wife's breasts. I had forgotten they were so openly available. Keith took a long time to cum, but cum he did. Two other men followed Keith.
Somewhere a clock chimed. 'Its six o'clock folks. The Dungeon is now optional, beds are mandatory.' We trooped out in ones and twos following Bea's directions to find an empty or occupied bed. I found the twins and snuggled down between them. Keith was sharing a bed with Beth and Bea. He would have a wild experience when he woke up.
My Slaves had driven everyone wild. What a party.
What a Halloween, perhaps I had another in me.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI have read hundreds of stories in numerous categories. This attempt at writing is a published FIRST DRAFT. This should represent step one in process that consists of at least three more reviews. I have NEVER seen such a high concentrations of common mistakes in what purports to be a finished product. Take this down, edit it or find a literate, skilled, patient resource to remove the layers of verbal muck that make up this mess. You have the makings of a good story here. Regrettably, in its present form, it would need a complete overhaul to even approach an honest evaluation as pathetic.
switch-board (switchboard)
customers phone (customer’s)
Boss (boss) (40)
Sir (sir) (23)
store room (storeroom) (2)
re-setting (resetting)
Yacht (yacht)
first junk (food) meal
clients phone (client’s)
its your (it’s) (15)
Bin (bin)
an he had (and)
Mondays activities
Now you may remember I am over 6 foot (IN ORDER FOR THE READER TO REMEMBER SOMETHING ABOUT A CHARACTER IT IS NECESSARY FOR THE AUTHOR TO HAVE MENTIONED IT)
your fired (you’re) (2)
Your (your) (2)
re-set (reset)
Tomorrow (tomorrow)
town house (townhouse)
bull nose (bullnose)
Bo (bo)
Odd (odd)
my self (myself)
Ta Dah (dah)
Ballet (ballet)
Fairy (fairy)
re-filled (refilled) (2)
foot steps (footsteps)
un-done (undone)
Grandma's (grandma's) (3)
Sis (sis) (3)
spot light (spotlight)
glassware (A CHANDELIER IS NOT GLASSWARE!!!!)
tanned, taught, terrific girls (taut)
what ever (whatever)
Goodie (goodie)
two moist cunt's (cunts) ()
Whack (whack)
sisters (sister’s)
Crack (crack)
Buttock (buttock)
whips (whip’s)
with-out (without) (2)
twins (twin’s) (2)
twins (twins’) (5)
bought down (brought)
laying supine (lying)
Cumming (cumming) (2)
Any time (Anytime)
every thing (everything)
your awake (you’re) (2)
I woke with two eager mouths licking my rampant cock . . . sucked my now rampant cock (WHEN HE WOKE UP HIS COCK WAS RAMPANT MINUTES IT BECAME RAMPANT???? WTF!!!!)
Felecia's (Felicia's) (5)
no where (nowhere)
You (you)
down stairs (downstairs)
Anal (anal)
titer (titter)
Some times (Sometimes)
SOMETIMES passions get raised and SOMETIMES jealousy rears its ugly head and people have SOMETIMES got hurt
trick or treats (tricks)
Mothers (Mother’s)
re-fit (refit)
silk shirt (and) presented
Bisexual (bisexual)
parents (parent’s)
Money (money)
way to soon (too)
Bag (bag)
Gin and Tonic (gin and tonic)
her self (herself)
(-a) (as) well as at the rope factory
Father (father)
side line (sideline)
wont (won’t) (3)
Lobster (lobster)
pettifores (petit fours)
hand full (handful)
planed (planned)
God Bless (God bless)
older than me (I)
business woman (businesswoman)
goodbye's (goodbyes)
had a nice diner (dinner)
Jesters (jester’s)
Clown outfit (clown)
Limo (limo) (4)
also in a gated community (-a big old pile) (WHAT THE HELL DOES THIS MEAN!?!?!?!?)
discus
it (discuss)
loosing battle (losing)
Dad (dad) (2)
Mom (mom) (4)
nkew (knew)
gods sake (God’s)
run through (run-through) (3)
sound proof (soundproof)
Goody (goody)
laughed like a drain (MEANINGLESS POORLY DESCRIBED!!!!)
Questions (questions)
free for all (free-for-all)
Slaves (slaves) (5)
Silent (silent)
Hummed (hummed)
Boots (boots)
Body (body) (2)
pass or to (two)
melt down (meltdown)
Cane (cane) (2)
Ky (KY)
No Way (way)
Triumph (triumph)
Thrall (thrall)
remover the vibrator (removed)
Lush (lush)
made free with all the bodies (INDECIPHERABLE!!!!)
My (my) (2)
de-flower (deflower)
Mouth (mouth) (3)
Suck (suck)
My Cock (cock)
Cum (cum)
Anus (anus)
watch BEA’S SHOW. BEA’S SHOW
mothers (mother’s)
Sylvia was canned (caned)
He (he)
Fuck (fuck)
Ladies (ladies)
Vibrators (vibrators)
to he hilt (the)
lay back (lie)
Glans (glans)
Thrust (thrust)
Balls (balls) (2)
giive (give)
one minute (one-minute)
BedtimeStories77over 17 years agoVery hot!! I loved this story, Sir. :) I look forward to reading more by You!
kbateover 17 years agoI liked it, but think you can do much better. Keep writing, the potential is there for some great stuff.
