All Comments on 'Service'

Excellent work, I had to read it in 2 sessions, not only was it long but I had to have time to clean myself up I haven't come so many times and so hard just by reading. The writing was OK but the horny factor was fantastic! I will be looking out for your work in future!!

Hope the series contiues

An excellent incest/taboo story that brings the whole family into the picture! Written very well. Although it is a long read, it is well worth the time. I hope the author will consider continuing the story (hint, hint).

Great story...keep up the hot writing!

well lets see 19 chapters i came at least 19 times couldn't get threw a chapter without cuming keep up the good writing

One of the best i have read.

WELL DONE SAYS IT ALL

great story... liked the large amount of oral!

omg. that was amazing i had to ait there with my vibrator i have used it so much that my pussy is sore. damn good writng keep it.

God that is one amazingly hot story. Teasingly long but well worth it. You are good! Thank you!

Who would have thought that such a long story would keep an individual so entertained and aroused.

loose the gay stuff

Excellent writing! I loved every chapter, and wish I could have been at the party!

this is a crazy good story

oh my god i loved that story i had to keep rubbing myself... thank you so much for writing it, think of writing more!!!!

I really liked this story - only it was terribly long.

Wow, that story was so amazing. I gave myself my first orgasm while reading it! It wonderful!

I throughly enjoyed your story. For me it was not a sexual interest but one of pure whole some interest. I couldn't wait to find out what happens next. Me and my girlfriend. We sat here and read daily for three days all to come to a horrible ending. I hope that you do continue it cuz I felt left in the middle not at the end. But it was still a great read. Good work!

Great author, have enjoyed all his storys that I've read

One word describes this story....."FAN-FUCKIN-TASTIC"!! PLEASE add more to this one!!

Wow, great writing. Took me a while to read it, but was well worth it! I'm sure I will check out your other work after this one!

OH my goodness! I haven't taking my hand out of my pants since I started this story! AMAZING. Definately keep it coming.. or cumming! Whichever!

The incestuous content should have grossed me out but instead I found myself excited despite myself. This is the BEST erotic story I have ever read - who would have thought it would be about incest? I don't know if I should see my therapist or my sister!

i never thought that a story about incest could turn me on so much. i gave myself several orgasms while i read it, even though it did take a while to finish. please keep writing more!!!

my god, keep on with this story. One of the best i have ever read. Love the tone. Love the discriptions...love them a lot.

I read this over a few days, when time was permitting. There's something about incest that really gets you going. Brilliantly written, loved all the characters especially Kelly and Karin. Keep writing Try Anything and I'm sure we'll all keep reading them!

We enjoyed the story very much, although we had to read it over the span of four days because we kept stopping to play and fuck <wink>. I've written several erotic stories myself and salute TryAnything for his well written style and engaging story. Unfortunately, there are far too many submissions in this genre that would score poorly in a high school english class, but this story is gramatically satisfying, plausible in its setting and structure, and delightfully erotic.

Roadie

Wall to wall sex! If that's what someone wants, I know where to send him. I enjoyed it. You made your characters engaging, if not totally believable. Like everyone else, I had to read it over several sessions, but I admit without shame, I was never completely soft while I read. One little anatomical thing: it is not possible for a guy to enter a girl's vagina several inches and then come up against her maidenhead. The hymen is located right at the mouth of the vagina, no more than 1/4 inch back, and at most he would feel a bit of stretching before it broke and he entered. We just have to write our stories a little differently to take care of that fact. And by the way, I have known more than one female type who didn't know where her hymen used to be! (lol). You write entertaining stories and I'll be looking for the next one.

This story had Me cumming the entire time.I played with myself so much my pus*** was sore. It was written beautifully I enjoyed it immensely. I hope that you add more to it if possible. Just keep up the good work.

What a dynamite story! Just thinking about it is going to have me damp for days to come.

Big extra points for good spelling and grammar -- I always find poor writing in erotic tales pulls me out of being able to fully enjoy the experience of reading them. Fine, stimulating scenarios are marred by dreadful prose.

Please, oh please, write volume two of this tale!

if you ever have some free time, my god what you must do in it. thanks for posting this story, makes me think twice about letting someone take control of me

I had to read this story one chapter at a time!! I was cumming sooo much!!! Now, I can go back and start all over again.

i can only think of three or four stories in all the ones i've read that would have actually be written well enough for me to enjoy reading while i recovered bellow decks. great work, keep it comming.

This is my favorite story to read while playing with myself! My only qualm is the usage of the word "bowels" when describing anal sex. But other than that, HOT.

This was one hell of a story. I started and and couldn't walk away from my computer till I finished it... HOT.

Oh my god my virgin pussy finally got wat it deserved from this delisios stori. THANK U

My god, this was incredible. I've read this story several times now, and I just can't stop cumming. My cock just stays rock hard the whole way thru, just as I cum, I read on, and i'm hard again! This story is A+++

this tale just left me. I've cum four times and my lil' one is exhausted. No, wait, up again........

I loved your story! It made me so damn hot I had to stop several times so that I wouldn't end up screwing my laptop. I love how you pulled everything together in the end, with everybody fucking everybody.

I think I'm going to re-read it again, and re-read it.

Damn that was hot, I'm so damn wet from it.

Wow, did I ever love this story - it got me so wet and horny, and had to stop reading so I could fuck myself with a dildo several times. Thanks for the great story

i cummed once per chapter... amazing!!!

Oh my god... I came at least twice per chapter. Took me 2 days to read it because I was worn out halfway through. BRILLIANT!! I loved it!

Took a couple of day's for us to read it something kept coming up.......

What a fantatic story, took a few days to read, made me so horny, my boyfriend was also well impressed, all i can say is totaly amazing.

This has to be one of the best storys ive read so far, it had everything you could want in the way of sex with nothing left out fantastic great writing, it was so very erotic i came twice over and could have cum again, i do hope you are going to write some more of this story, i cant wait for more of the same adding more people to the story as you go , so please do go on writing more to this story, you are some writer i must say, keep up the great work, you do have a gift for writing , it like you could almost be part of the story doing all the things in it, one last word and that it fantastic.

this kept me reading for days! i must have come like 10 times! i never really knew what was going to happen next, and i absolutely loved it. it was like one of those really great novels that you just wish would never end.

i hope you write a part two!

That was great! Luved it. It made me so fucking horny I was basically coming the whole way through. HOTT! I look forward to reading more of your work.

I agree this is the very best hottest erotic story!!!

thanks man it was great i cum 3 times in 2 hours cool!!!!!!!!!!!!

Took the meaning of erotic reading for me to the next level.

Please tell me there is more to this story! I absolutely loved it! Muy caliente

this would make the best porn movie ever filmed!

This one needs to be made into a movie! And the sooner the better.....

Wow that was a really worth while read. It got me so horny!!!!!!!!! Please write more!

omg. fuck that was the best thing i have ever read. it was my first literotica read and i dont think i fell asleep that night i was to busy cumming. you know how to write some great stuff

This was the first literotica story i ever read. it made me sooo wet and it made me fantasize about the whole story. the story was sooo good. it was sooo descriptive and very vivid.

fantastic

This has all of the ingredients of great sex; young girls getting their first cock and pussy, older women acting as teacher for both the girls and the young boys, first time taking cock up the ass and cunt eating after it has been filled with cum. My pussy was wet from the first paragraph and I would pool up on the chair. My goal is to find some willing cocks and pussy as you describe in the story -- sex is so much fun we all should have some every day. This writer is very talented -- I only hope that he is writing from experience and this is not just a fantasy. It is fucking great !!!

This has got to be, by far, the absolute hottest fucking story I've read since I've been on Lit.

Just kept twisting with a nice climax well done

Family life is great... whole heartedly enjoyed the reading and paralleling it with my own family life. Hope you will write more. Candee

I've never made it all the way through this story before because I'll always cum by page six.

each and every page was hotter than the last. i got harder while reading this than ever before. im normally 6", but when i was reading this, i got up to about 7 1/2". i really hope you come out with something else like this! : )

Right up ther with Dangerous Liasons.

WOW - This is the first time I have delved into the Portal and I think it is just great and Service is worthy of a much better score than currently. Beautifully done. Great!

tales I have ever read. It is an advertisement of the joy and fun of sex, without depersonalizing or deprecating this most powerful urge. The ancient rite of seniour, the first night deflowering of the maiden, was enjoyed only by the local prince. And why? because deflowering is joyful, and the full participation in the discovery of a newly deflowered person's exploration, in safety, of the potentials of intimacy as a physical act of pleasuring and being pleasured is perhapsthe ultimate human experience.

i love this kind of girl....

i thort it was briliant even if it does go on a bit lol! it made me cum n had 2 satisfy myself but my sister sucks me all time n its one of the best blowjobs ive ever had

A bit repetitive as far as all the sex scenes go, but a creative and interesting storyline nonetheless. Would make a saucy movie script. Usually I'd feel a bit weird reading incest stories but this one was enjoyable.

amazing. it made me cum many times.

well done.

Wow, a magnificent piece of work. Definately should be at the top of the listings

Very long, but very erotic.

I'm a new member, and I have to say great work. I haven't read it all yet, but what I have read is very, very good, indeed!

That story was amazing, simply amazing. The length of it was incredible as well. The only thing I found that could have been corrected was the sense of "Oh, you were wonderful. May I eat your pussy?" type thing. They asked every time, it was always polite and almost innocent. Now, I like it romantic and nice sometimes, I'm sure everyone does, but it just felt a little odd. It was so innocent...As innocent as it could get when you're screwing your own sibling and whoring them out, that is. That is nothing, though. This story was almost perfect otherwise.

Overall - The best story I've ever read, period. Simply amazing.

Since I was recently introduced(seduced)to this site, I have given up on xxx movies. My imagination is much more powerful than seeing and hearing.

I was blerryeyed from the beginning with all these different kinds of incest(everything but the family pet) I've ever experienced. It hooked me in from the beginning, I stayed through all 19 pages. I normally flake out after 3. Thanks for story. Best on your site so far. I will now read all the stories on this site.

This was a great story and has kept me hard the entire time. Keep up the great work.

nice story....still think it weird when people say this is how their lives are.....X@

After thoroughly enjoying "Erin" I was delighted to find this one by the same very inventive writer. Keep up the good work. Atillakiss

a whore for a daughter and a son for a pimp, your characters are not realistic.

where the main character comes too fast and the women do not scream 'I am cummmmmmmmmminnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng.

The Best story I have read on this site.

the best story i've read in a long time

....needs some grammer work and "Becky" was used when "Kelly" should have been but very erotic.

this was the first story i have ever read thats like this. it was awesome

Where's the resolution?

I want to hear about Jason finding out what his kids have been doing with the neighbors and how (if?) John wins the bet. Otherwise, quite entertaining!

This is the best story I've seen. I like the length; most on this site are too short for me. Not only was the action great, but the spelling and grammar were far superior to most of what I've seen.

Thanks! I'll be checking out your other stories.

The first three pages had me completely into it.

I feel that John and Kelly's first fuck should have been more significant.

After that, things just seemed to be rushed and repetitive.

Keep up the good work.

I like the length, I was able to visit the story over two days and it certainly got the juices flowing, but the details were recycled over and over again, which did get repetitive.

Long,but amazing.The characters are not beleivable,but the story was excidingly entertaining.Keep it going.

This story has lots of great action, but some of the scenes seem repetitive in the details and the word choice. Some new words for pussy might be nice... like slit, box, snatch, cave, flower, hole, depth, center... you get the picture.

Otherwise, I enjoy the plot twists and I'd love to find out - what happens next? Who are the next party's guests? Does John win the bet with his dad? Does the whole family start fucking each other?

Please Keep Writing... just, get a sexy thesaurus.

The best story on this site, and the best I've ever read so far. I loved everything about it, no complaints at all. I have one small request, can you please please, continue this. I would love to see it get longer and longer. You definitely got an incredible story here. I read all your other ones because of this one. But, non can top it. Thank you for sharing your great writing and imagination.

Thank You

that was the longest stroy i've ever read and i loved it !!!!:)

Unbelievable. KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!

too long for one sitting, and, it gets hard to remember where you left off

This story is straight our of my fantasy!

i loved it the whole time i was getting wet! i played with my clit as i read this also;) it really go me in the mood. i want to here more dirty stories now to make me cumm! i've havent read all that many stories and people dont think im that sexualy active since im 15 and a girl but that got me soo horney! thank you! and is there any sugestions of how to make me orgasm [by myself] i havent ever ahd one i havent cumm ethier but i want too sooo badd

I couldn't read it all at once, but I was able to remember where I was the whole time! It is an awesome story, one of the best I have ever read. I loved how each part has its own little twist that keeps it going, which also allows for it to be broken into pieces if need be. I cummed many times over this story, once per sitting, and it took me around 10 sittings to go through, once. So yeah, 10 cums from one story, that is quite the ratio, the author deserves total credit here and I look forward to reading more stories from this author.

who ever wrote this should get an award

you should really think about making this into a movie

it wouldnt be considered a porno or anything

just a rated R movie

but n e way...

i felt as tho i was in the story with them

brilliant

Apsolutly Amazing

you get a 100 out of 10

That was absolutly fantastic!!! I've never really been able to get into incest stories but I don't think any story has ever gotten me as hot as this one did. It was like a award winning book with better results! GENIUS!

One of the most believable stories!! realistic and entertaining!!! KEEP Continuing yi!!