All Comments on 'Service'

... just absolutelt amazing!

The length didn't bother me a bit. It was like a small booklet I could keep coming back to. It rapt my attention. The characters were developed well, and you got into them. The sex was great, and kept one thoroughly aroused. Really enjoyed it!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. This is one of the very rare few that are worth re-reading.

I'm forced to disagree somewhat with the above comment. No story is perfect for every member of the audience, and I believe it is a poor reader that cannot find any value at all in a story. Even if all you can say is that it was well-written.

I can admit that much of the action was less than realistic. I can admit that I've known men like Jason, and wives who are married to them, who just might, upon reading this story, embark on a similar course as Karin, or forever wish they had the guts to do so.

The other thing that tickled me were the twists and turns in the plot. I was entertained throughout the story. All in all, it had sufficient quality for inclusion here, even though I found only parts of the action stimulating.

I am not really into the incest thing, but with the way you wrote this story I had to finish it. Great job.

I, as a reader enjoy stories that are grammatically correct, with most - if not all - the spelling errors removed. So far, having read three of your stories I have found the quality to be at a standard that there are no such irritating mistakes to detract from the enjoyment of the plot. My only complaint - and this is not towards the author - is that due to my dial-up connection, I am unable to read extremely long submissions. Overall 5/5.

Just as with all your stories, I couldn't help but get myself off!! It's a fantasy I live in and I enjoyed every minute of it.

this is a fav story,,and my 2nd read,,i savored it by reading 1 or 2 chapters a day,,and then going off to read other tales,,

this is well written and has wonderful sexul descriptions,,i love kelly's assertiveness, sunny attitude, love of family, sexual prowes,and her loyalty for her primary lover, john! family incest is best!!

I have just finished your 'Service' series and, I have to say, that it is one of the best erotic stories I have ever read! Oh, if only we could all live our lives like that.

Generally very well written, with very few grammatical and spelling errors - that makes a nice change. Please add another chapter or write more in the same vein. Thank You.

I have just finished your 'Service' series and, it is one of the best erotic stories I have Ever read!

I really like the many, and long chapters. Lots of fun and erotica. Thanks!

too much of the exact same fucking.

So good!! I honestly didn't want it to end! You have done an incredibly good job with this! Well done! :)

I have to say, I am not at all in to the whole incestuous side of this, but it is so well written that it never fails to produce a raging erection, every time I read it. Absolutely one of my favorite authors!

Great story. Would love to partake in some action like this.

I loved the way you kept throwing in new twists and kept the story unpredictable, but the surprises were always pleasurable. Lots of room for more story, if you would be so kind as to keep writing more. I did notice that although the women were all quick to accept licking each other's pussies, there was only the single instance of a man sucking another. And all the women eventually happily took it in their asses, but none of the men ever did. The situation with father is still unresolved. Lots more action is possible, and I'd love to read more.

this was an incredible story i came to on at least 3 different occasions twice.i would have loved some squirting,or an epilogue,but this is easily my fave story on literotica.

This is the most amazing story I came at least three times in 5minutes of reading this keep up the fucking amazing work!

Original premise was good, but could be redone with twins only having oral sex with each other. Then the twins could have discovered their parents having sex with others and given them to pursue their interest -- MONEY. The twins could have enticed others and started a real "Service". I guess some like incest, but I really don't. Twins could have set up quite a business & thought the "party" could be the start - but it was the end, and ho-hum. No direct feedback available....

CajunBill

to busy wanking up a spurt of cum to write..

Really liked the story until the "parties" then I got a little confused but all in all it was great.

Cummed so many times. Hot.

Your imagination and writing skills are wonderful. Thank you for the amazing read. Hope you continue to write.

really erotic!!!!! expecting more of this kind....... thumbs up for the author

When I saw the length of the story I was slightly concerned ! But I read it straight through and I was very , very pleased . The concerns with the story line were unfounded after some pages into the story . Bravo! Bravo ! This one goes on my favorite list for rereading many more times . There are not too many on that rather short list but this is now one of them . Bravo , Bravo !

im feeling so horny and my panties are soaked this story is amazing! i need more erotic stories like these they pleasure me so much and FYI if u want to know, im fingering my pussy and stuffing a highlighter in my ass for some reason...

This was a great, very hot, story. I thought the last chapter with the orgy was not up to par with the other chapters, not bad just not as good. And i wanted to read about when John beat Jason on the golf course. But, a great incest story combining the best type of incest (mother/son) with the second best (brother/sister). I also did not like john sucking the man's dick (I forget name), we could have done without that little episode. A little male play in childhood and adolescence is OK with me but I don't care for adult male/male interaction. To those that like it I have no complaint with you but I just don't care for it myself. This story avoided BDSM, I don't care for that, either and appreciate it being left out. Thank you, TryAnything, for this wonderful and hot story. John and Kelly were especially hot, along with their classmate friends. If you ever write the addendum where John beats his Dad on the golf course I will read it, fer shure!

I came four times from this story its so hot

Excellent story had me riveted and hard all the way through... The final chapter was not quite as good - not so keen on John sucking cock.... An alternative ending could have turned the tables revealing that the father had planned all along to turn his wife and two children into high earning sex providers in the local area and a gang bang scene featuring a fully depraved daughter pleasuring 15 of the local fathers could have been secretly filmed by him (not showing any of the men's faces) for distribution on the internet to make even more money....

You never fail to please. very well done!

Epic, finished in two sessions. The twins were hot and kept the tension up. Imho feel that plot repetition midway pulled the story down, while three instances of name mixups made me wince. Other than those, kudos and thanks for your massive effort!

Very long, but also quite varied. Nice story.

i like this story very much, but i have a question.

do you have a similar story that is more like the first half of this one?

especially the revenge part combined with the "company idea" and the horny sister made it awesome for me.

Literature! Top ranking!

I appreciate your great imagination and your ability di describe scenes vividly. However, it jarred me, and took away from my focus on the story when you consistently misused I/me and lay/lie. y ou tell someone to lie down, or to lay the towel on the ground, I.e. Lay needs an object to be laid. For thi I/me problem, try leaving out the other person and you will hear that it is (someone) and me, not I.

I look forward to more of your stories, hopefully without the distraction of the poor grammar😏.

Wonderful story! All the fucking and sucking kept me wet most of the time. I loved it best when the young daughters seduced and fucked their fathers. Made me very horny!

Ive have read a lot of stories on here many of yours as well and I've got to say this is the best yet!

Far and away one of the hottest, horniest stories on here !

I'm just sorry it didn't continue - there are just so many possibilities for this to be developed further, but that said it was 19 pages of pure filth and I loved it !

Well worth more than the 5 Stars I could give it.

Wow! This was one of the hottest stories I have ever read on this website. It held my attention throughout. It contained a lot of wild sexual imagination. It was an adventure I would love to experience in real life. It was erotic and sexy without being gross.

I have just finished reading my first story on this site, and my my... What a ride!

Happy sex, all thru, and not even a 'bad' word. Did I like it? Hell.. s'ckuse me, Oh Yes, I sure did!

Young, innocent and all friendly sex. Truthfully? Not likely. Don't need to be! A good story with lots and lots of happy sex, that whats really counts for me!

I'll browse around a little now, but be warned, TryAnything; I'll be back! (To check out Your other stuff. ;-)

Well written and very erotic. It's full of steamy sex throughout and supported by a well thought out story line. I'm looking forward to reading a lot more from TryAnything.

This is a tale of delicious depravity, there's something for just about everyone. Well done!

Fucking hell. Insane I'll follow Kelly and John to the ends of the earth fucking and sucking forever. Mmmmm. This is by far the best I've read.

Read this submission around 10 years ago, and now again, found it too convulated and over the top fantasy. Not everyone's cup of tea I guess.

Hell of a story

Even a dead man will masturbste by reading this story

Great job

I loved the story but wished that they had stayed with just the families and skipped the orgy at the end

I agree with

Sex4lf57

02/21/19

I loved the story but wished that they had stayed with just the families and skipped the orgy at the end

This story would have received a 5 if it had. Instead its a solid 4 and a half :)

A new favorite

I, too, first enjoyed this story several years ago and came back to it in April 2019. I really enjoyed the early parts but find myself wanting to like much of the story more than I actually like it.

Hands down the best I've read on literotica, and I've been coming here for longer than a decade. Wonderful. Ticked so many fantasy boxes for me.

If ever there was a story that was worthy of 10 stars, I think this is it. I don't recall ever reading such a well written and engaging story as this one on this site. That it was very long would normally put me off but I kept coming back and read it over four days.

Superb, well done.

tHIS N=MADE MYDEAD COCK STIR. And after only reading pages one and 19. VERY well written

Why is this not a movie yet?

one of my fav's. Really well written, unbelievably erotic. WOW. just fantastic. GREAT story idea. wow

My sister and I loved this story so much, it just got better and better, as did the orgasms we had when she was impaled on my cock, while the situations got more involved and more wonderfully taboo!

Thank you so much for helping us get more comfortable with each others bodies and the taste of each other's cum.

Best story we've read so far!! XX

I need MORE

Easily the best story on the site!

One of the best on Lit. But there are a couple of places where the timeline goes all Groundhog Day. Becky one night watches John fuck Kelly. Then the next night, Becky acts surprise that they fuck. And while they're fucking, they tell Becky that they fucked Sara's dad. Then 5 minutes later, tell her again and she's shocked that they fuck Sara's dad. Same later with Sara. She watches Kelly and John fuck her parents and each other, but the next night is surprised they fuck each other. If you send it to me in .doc I'd be happy to edit and highlight these issues.

I managed to get all the way to the end but feel your story is too long and many of the sex scenes are very repetitive.

I know this is make believe but does every man have an 8inch cock and able cum 4 or 5 times in a short space of time, does every woman like licking pussy, loves the taste of cum and love anal sex??

Each to their own but it speaks volumes about the users of this site that so many of the top stories here are about incest, I find this rather troublesome!!

Incest between consenting adults is a much-maligned behavior that has no reason to remain illegal in a modern world with so many forms of birth control. The original reasons for the prohibitions on incest remain valid, though they are easily surmounted with modern technology. Those who close their minds to this have other issues with sexuality that they should deal with. Consensual activity of any kind between consenting adults should have no bounds or legal restrictions.

This was a very hot exciting story. I came continuously. The batteries in my favorite vibrator are exhausted. I need a good hard cock or two or three now .

I just couldn’t stretch the story out. I knew I was useless until I finished it. So hot!

I have never read a story like that before. I really had to hold my cum back, many times.

Incroyable I was overcome phew

Wow! Loved it! Very, very hot!

I'd LOVE to see what they can do at university!

This story was excellent. I got off on this several times.

This story made me hard and horny from the beginning. And now it ended I want more of this to keep me hard an masturbating until I cum over and over again...

Thanks!

WAUW !

Thanks for sharing ;-)

Hot, hot, hot! Got off on this so many times...

My dick is sore! No seriously, this is one of the hottest and most well written stories of all time. Kudos to the author and editors! Great Job!

Kelly is all time!

Dude! I fapped infinite number of times, while reading this story. Awesome! Gave a 5star rating:)

Fantastically erotic story that I enjoyed tremendously. Thank you for writing it

OH MY GOSH!!! I fucked my pussy and my ass over and over and over while reading this!! The characters came (pun intended) alive off of the pages and I could see, feel, smell and taste each and every one of them. I have never fucked myself so many times while reading a story! I had my pussy pump, clit sucker and several other toys going at the same time and it was soooooo fucking good!!!

A little too far over the top. Not realistic.

What can you say other than PERFECTION has finally been reached. It is the most erotic story I’ve ever read. Thank you for entertaining me with so many ejections. You are the BESTK

Very well written, just a little over the top towards the end! And no self respecting 18 year old high school senior rides a bike to school!!

First time I read this story in 2006 and its still my favorite one.

Couldn't get past her basically being the town whore.

Really, really need a sequel to this

Totally great stuff

I don't visit Literotica very often, then I often find something that stimulates me...but this story hit the ball out of the park.

A great sequel would be John and Kelly going off to college and educating the educators!

A little long but held my interest throughout and kept me, more importantly, hard. Only thing missing were senior citizens.

Damn

Definitely need AP sequel!

I loved it all. Can I cum to the next party?

That was so much fun to read

That was hot! I'm sure you got hot writing it. I sure got hot reading it. Thank you.

As a woman, I loved it. Wasn't sure about the length (pardon the pun) when I first saw it but as I knew it was cumming to the end, I wanted more. Having dated twins (m-f) in college, they do have their own chemistry. They too grew up experimenting with each other. I think it would be amazing to have someone identical to myself that we could explore each other. Your character development was just deep enough. I know I too kept cumming as I read! Then when I finished, I had my husband read it and kept him hard throughout all 19 pages making him finally explode once he mad it to the orgy. He begged me to let him cum during the early pages but I knew he would love the ending. So did I.

Loved it, a non stop super hot and steamy story. guaranteed to excite!

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Awesome story, I loved it