All Comments on 'Nobody Rides For Free Ch. 01'

You mean there is more to come?

If Dog hadn't been a TRUE friend his marriage would have been over. Although Riley wouldn't allow it either. A true friend and a true love, a lucky man. Austin should have recognized that replacing a no-win situation with a no-win situation has no gain whatsoever.

I was a little surprised that the doctor didn't push him toward a psychologist. And Dog is the one that does suggest it? When my hip went out the doctors office was calling me checking to see if I felt any depression.

A very good tale and well told. The emotion is well displayed.

Did you miss Chapter Two? It's in there.

I was going to read one page this AM and finish it later. I couldn't stop reading till I finished the story. This was a really good read! It had everything a reader looks for, especially true feelings between a husband and wife. It was fun to read this tale. Thanks.

classic curious 2c story... another WIMP hubby / man story...

the plot was just bloody silly...

the doctor says no Viagra b/c of the head injury for a few months... fair enough.

Yet when Hubby suggests wifey think about another cock "for release" it has been according to the author SEVERAL months already!!!

Hubby is the ultimate in wimpness and the ultimate in selfish behavior. His supposed "sacrifice" is nothing more than the ultimate wimp out...

Hubby never goes back to the Doc to ask is now ok to use the little blue pill... nor does Hubby ever get around to thinking that maybe there might be a psychological issue at work here when anyone over the age of 12 could see there clearly was...

clearly hubby the wimp biker is involved in his own self pity.... there are no hints that wife is about to leave or cheat.... just his own self absorbed biased slanted perceptions that IF his cock problem were to last for infinity she COULD MAY BE ONE DAY leave...

Hubby's argument is premised that well a woman's orgasm from a cock is a wholly different one and far superior to one of say that of oral stimulation... which as we all know is false.

Talk bout being delusional.

hard to believe ... a WIMP biker...

This story was one of oyur best, no repeats from other. It weas true in is form and touched all many aspects of life and marriage. WE can not perdict life or sometimes plan for it. Your story shows that love can CONQUER all and work through problems/

the best the very best. I have read your stories, but they always left me...indifferent. i like the style and the writing but the basic premise always left me cold. This one hit me RIGHT! everything you had before and none of the cold feeling. wonderful. ok i am a sap for a happy ending. this was the very best happy ending even if it took Oz too long to figure it out, and his wife and best friend got there ahead of him. i will continue to look for your tales knowing that you have stories that leave me feeling good about reading them instead of cold.

very good story

Enjoyed this story. Wish you would have taken the character of Dog and given him his own story. Loved that character. Could you consider giving Dog his own story in the section of Romance? I'm in lust.

The chapter one is a mistaken entry.

with great characterization. A very different and interesting story. You show how love can be at it's best!

Regards, DJ

Not much more that I can say. A wonderful tale, beautifully told. I'm still amazed at the talent sometimes displayed on this site. My sincere thanks to the author.

Well done, though you had me worried through chapter one, even knowing your history of writing, as to this being a trumped-up excuse for a cuckold husband. In real life his doctor who he went and told of his impotency problem would have sent him back to the psychiatrist who would be part of his medical team when he was in the hospital with amnesia. The problems would have been addressed with both spouses. This is a fantasy and we wouldn’t have a story if this had been done.

I hope my remarks are not redundant as I can no longer see the new stories public comments, except for the first one, since Saturday. I found others are having the same trouble. I don’t know what Literotica is doing but only the first page of comments at most can be read.

Your writing is very good as always and this was good entertainment.

Thank you

With very high regards

One of the best stories to appear on this site,I will not say anymore because it may affect other peoples enjoyment.

This is the first of your tales that I have read. I got it from the 'New story' list. What a lucky discovery. I enjoyed your writing as you can tell. The writing is clear and consise. I missed reading what Oz's boss had in for him when he discovered how much Oz was doing. small point Great story

WOW...You said this is chapter 1...can hardly wonder what is going into chapter 2. Hope you don't change anything about these two love birds. But then again they will be having children.

a closet cream pie loving husband,,, pushed as he may, "Do" is just too moral/loyal a friend (or was he?),,,

there was not point in this long story, except a man going impotent (he told us) as a way to get his wife to fuck with the good bud, who supposedly refused to fuck her as the hubby wanted; finally he realized he didn't need to push the wifey so hard to fuck another man and viola, his dick got hard again, finita! lol

not sure what the you can add for ch. 02?

I love the story how it had love behind it and not just lust sometimes adding what love people have for each other is very rewarding in the outcome rather than them just having sex wam bam thank you ma'am

and so good to see you release something new...enjoyed it very much. Thank you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

A very descriptive fight scene and terrific dialogue throughout. Thanks for writing.

I guess I'm one of the only readers who did not like your plot. Your writing is always excellent, but I could not get over the incredible stupidity of Riley and Oz.e.g. Oz's biker friends lived on the "edge" of life, one step away from the law or jail.Many of these "friends"hang out in Oz's garage while Riley serves them beer and chips in her skimpy outfit with her ass hanging out.She and Oz thinks its cute when they make personal comments to her that make her blush.In spite of the fact that loving wife ,Riley, gets very horny when she rides on a vibrating Harly, Oz has her ride to the store on Dog's Harly to get more beer. While at the store her skimp outfit causes guys to hit on her, but Dog protects her by grabbing her ass and telling the guys she's his "bitch". With friends like that who needs enemies. I don't know who is more stupid in your story, Riley or Oz. Why doesn't Oz just advertise that she is available. The terrible rape and beating is tragic but with Oz's buddies it's not very shocking. I have to congratulate you. After that horrible beginning you did write a wonderful story following the rape and beating. It's too bad the beginning was so irritating. 60 year old George

real late to post a comment considering I read your story a few days back. had to remind myself to do so but long story short, it was an awesome short story!!! I liked the build up, the eroticism and interesting finish.

not a typical literotica posting by current standards (sorry!).

I really liked this story. It was an excellent outcome from a tragic happening. I think we all kind of knew that it was going to end up like this. Nowhere did I get the hint that Austin or Riley would let this go the direction it started. They were too much in love.

I do have to agree with George's comment below though in one regard. They were foolish to have her prancing around in outfits that would inflame the guys that were always around helping them. Why tempt fate and bikers like that?

The one surprise to me though is that it wasn't Dog who nailed her and I don't necessarily think it had to be a rape if he had nailed her. I am glad it wasn't him though because they did end up as best friends and it would have been a shame if that hadn't happened. But again, to some extent they asked for it.

My motto is to not put yourself in situations that could spawn events you don't want to happen. Hell, my dick would have gotten ideas around her too the way you described her.

Thanks for a wonderful read. Your efforts are always appreciated.

Charleybear

I enjoyed the story and agree with most that it was generally well written but I must join 'Minority Vote' in the observation that the plot was much too implausible in a number of different ways most of which he has already stated so I won't bother repeating

This is one of the best reads I have had in here so far. I absolutly loved Dog, he reminds me of a biker friend of mine looks and acts tough but a big ol softie. Keep up the great writing lookin forward to reading more of your work.

when i had thought that oz was gonna make riley go with dog, and all that with him not being able to have sex. I had this story rated bout a 50, i lived with a wife for 8 yrs that couldnt have sex, on account of her health. I loved her and there was no way i would have gone with anyone else. when i see this in these stories, i know the strory isnt real. but as this story ended i loved it, one of the better stories i have read lately.

The absolute best story I have perused on Literotica. Well written and thought out. LOved the way you developed the chartacters. I felt for each of them.

I can greatly relate to the idea of giving it all up for the woman I love. At one point in my marriage that ended, I did just that. However, I became aware that she didn't love me as much as I had loved her. She didn't think twice about 'getting hers' elsewhere and when I tried valiantly to prevent her first act of 'permitted' infidelity, she tried to turn me into a cuckold. Good luck.

Great writing. Although for me, it hit a bit close to home.

So much better than that other terrible story of yours. Still very “male”… but acceptable “chauvy”. Your supermen did have “somewhat” of a personal, softer, human side to them. Your female character even had a little bite to her. She actual was capable of growling back, and speaks her own mind… at times. So, so much for the tough biker image… sweet.

Your writing style was a lot crisper in this story. Even though longer, this time I had no trouble maintaining my concentration while reading. My mind did not wander.

Your story was completely believable. You crossed your Ts and dotted your Is. The ED malady was an excellent idea.

Nici, you poor thing, you know NOTHING about men. The two heroes might have been rough around the edges, but they were not chauvinistic. Not one bit. Just because in a dangerous situation he called her "bitch" and grabbed her ass, that does not make him a caveman. Dog apologized for his actions and even explained why he did it. BUT these men were teddy bears when it counted. They would have done anything for Riley, including giving their lives without any thought whatsoever. I found this story romantic and loving. Both of these men loved Riley. Both of these men wanted her happiness now and forever. And if that isn't a romance, I don't know what is.

This lady loved this story.

This woman would have loved to meet real men like this, the kind who are strong AND tender when it counts, the kind who are selfless and loyal - now THAT is a man.

Incidentally, I never considered Riley a weak character. She was perfect match for our hero. Maybe Nici could explain better that critique. But what the heck do I know...I'm just a woman...

Great story.... the content was very good. That kind of love and commitment to one another is something that is hard to find but once found , you never want to let go of it.

A Graet and super story curious i wish you would write some new stories for this year.

Pat M.

You get better 'n better.

The literary quality of this story is excellent. From personal experience I know of the heartbreak of ED. It was well portrayed. But the story has a huge plot hole. What did Riley do when Austin freed her from "the rape on the bike?" When Charlie and Austin were having that fight it surely took more than a minute. She had time to call 911, as she does later when Charlie and Dog fight. That would have changed the course of the story, but not by much. Austin's injuries had already happened. The first attempted rape had happened. The only big difference is that the cops would have gotten there earlier. The author could have left time for Charlie and Dog to fight. Riley owes Austin an explanation. Indeed, when I first read that part of page 2 I thought that the sex was consensual and that Riley turned it into "rape" when Austin showed up in order to hide the fact that Charlie's bike had made her horny enough to cheat on Austin. I was wrong, but the scene is not completely clear. Everything else is fine, especially the strong characters.

I do not remember my wife at all and 8.5 years after my car wreck. I am paralyzed mid-back and can't have an orgasm. I get rock hard for hours with Viagra. My brain damage not only erased much of my past, it caused my personality to change. In a few months we will get a divorce. I love my son so much, so one great thing came from us. I do not remember my son from before my wreck but at 8 he remembers me only as I am today.

I keep telling myself that his is just a story. Hell no would a husband make himself a willing cuckold. Not believeable with the whoe ED problem, I am glad the author reversed course and corrected the ending

Started out as a good tale, but I gave up at chapter 4. A rape and violent assault, sexual dysfunction, a patient wanting Viagra to make things better with his wife, and no-one has mentioned counselling--not even a regularly visited medical professional aware of all these facts???

At least try to keep your stories in this universe.

What shit. Like women really want sex anyway. Most women think of sex as something to offer in exchange for having their bills paid.

who thinks it drags on a bit. I'm pleased to bits that they love each other but don't need constant repetition. Much as I admire anyone who can write stuff like this, and prefer not to criticise too much for fear of putting them off, I believe that it could be shortened quite a bit without losing any important feature.

Having said that, I am aware that some of the abuse writers can get on this site is vicious in the extreme. Some horrible people out there.

I enjoyed this; you managed to make the ups and downs believable, and some of the characters were well developed.

Thanks

Not because of the violence but because it pointed to the honest, loving, trustworthy men who were/are willing to do whatever it takes to do the right thing. Honorable men and women in a place many folks don't expect those attributes, the biker community.

I haven't been on a bike in many years, but still feel the kinship with those who ride. I knew/know many men like Dog and Oz and they are well showcased in this story.

Thank you.

Great story about true love. I have found that it is rare. Many people profess love but don't really mean it an that is why the divorce rate is what it is. Continue the good work.

Dog shoulda knocked that bitch up, not that wimp.

Phenomenal. [Okay, there are a few very minor writing flaws, but this isn't my day to nitpick.]

True friendship, and true love. (I liked the bit with Dog and Marie.)

Excellent work.

Others have pointed out some of the flaws in the story. Nevertheless, I rated it 5*****s because I cannot downgrade a very good story over a couple of minor flaws.

there are police officers or homosexuals in the story, the dirtbag hates cops and gays it seems

A very powerful story. It has elements in it that are obvious yet unobtrusive. The writing is excellent, the plot is uniquely original while the three main characters are very likeable. The depth of emotion is wonderful and realistically portrayed. Everything else simply adds flavor and texture to the main structure.

One of the few stories that make me feel good.

Way to go, c2c.

And I never will like these damned wimp and fag stories!

The main characters are over 30, have emotions, are human, etc....

Dwornock is an idiot.

I admit I loved this it was an awesome read, I am well experienced in the "biker scene" I've been riding on the back of one since the age of 8, some of the comments pissed me off though, for one bikers although not all of them most of what I have encountered they are the nicest and most decent people I know they go out of thier way to help others and are epecially carring of thier "biker family" seeing the comment "sissy biker" is what just down right pissed me off they take care of thier own just as my group does we protect our own. Most of the guys in our group have dog and oz's personality with the exception that thier almost always packing if you get my drift.....just saying not all bikers are rough tough tattooed assholes....untill you piss them off or put thier life or a loved ones life in jeopardy.

What a bunch of horse shit...I gave it a 1

hubby so in love with how wife looks.

Loved it. An excellent read. I am sure that this story will find me again. Why do some critics use the anonymous name? Can't quite figure that out?

Very nice story. Well written with some subtle nuances. An allegory for life with its ups and downs. Keep up the good work.

I enjoyed the story line very much! I gave it a high rating.

Why didn't Riley have a car?? Makes no sense. Why did Riley get on some else's bike?? Makes no sense. The story had plausibility issues but was well written with a happy ending but still made no sense. I really enjoyed it but I don't know why, makes no sense.

Thats the trouble with Harleys they vibrate too much

But some of this makes no sense. Like if Riley was going to the farmer's market to pick up fruit etc for the party why wouldn't she take her car? There are other nonsensical moments in the story like how is it that an areospace engineer and a stock analyst don't know about cunnilingus and the use of sex toys? I could go on but still gave four stars because I love a true love story between man and wife.

Too long, short

This writer describes every uninteresting detail in such drawn out precision that boredom sets in long before "sex" enters this tail. Although a few - very few - times the dirty dead finds it's way into this story, which seems to be much more about bikes than it is about sex, these sexual incidences are over shadowed by another drawn out overly nonsexual occurrence making any sexual arousal by the reader soon peter out. Suggest that the writer consider cutting out any reference to sex and submit the rewritten story to a biker travel magazine designed for elderly retired bikers where it might find a more fitting audience. PLEASE REMEMBER: erotica should help one to get it up and keep it up and if your story can not cause even a mild ticklish feeling below the belt before page three it doesn't belong here!

Why is this Ch. 01 ?

Eight years later and no Ch. 02

Seems to be finished, so why the title ?

one of the best stories i have ever read outside of stangstar06. and if a certain reader needs to be "hard" all the time he is reading a story, well that tells me is is doing something besides reading the story. keep up the good work

And very well-told

HP

Just sux.

Fine writing, but clearly needs to be in the non-erotic section. This is more of a young adult style romance than adult oriented erotica.

lots of intrigue, Author really manages to throw the reader for a loop on several occasions. i guess that really upset some people.

have to admit, after i finished the story i was surprised i fell for it every time.

by putting it in this category 1/2 the work is done already , coz the reader is expecting some cheating or cuck sh*t to happen. lol.

still very enjoyable read .

full of pleasant surprises , (rather than bad ones)

xxxhugsxxx

Agree fully with predecessor: Wrong departement. Has nothing to do in here. Would do nicely in the action departement.

This is a very good story and it isn't just sex, but it has a plot that turns out to be very true in my case. thanks

The solution to his problem is just plain fucking stupid! I guess in this fantasy story dildos have not been created or any other phallic type of object to replace is broken dick. Just a stupid and unbelievable. But the story up to that point was good.

Unbelievable! Who writes such drivel? How can anyone like any of these characters? Husband is a dickless wonder, buddy is a rapist, other buddy comes on to his woman constantly, his woman goes around with her cunt hanging out.

I couldn't get past page two so I skipped over here to express my disgust. It's even in the wrong category. A total cluster fuck. The writing and technical aspects are very good though. Get a good idea and you'll be just fine.

Have to be equally sick to enjoy it.

Oz's suggestion was just ridiculous, the whole premise was stupid, no real man would even offer such a suggestion, if Riley couldn't be satisfied by his tongue and fingers they should just get a dildo, and if that wasn't enough their marriage was ruined anyway,

through sickness and health, remember?

Not sure why this is designated as chapter 1, it seems finished to me.

What do you expect from an idiot cuck author?

Your story was different, well written, interesting, and enjoyable. Not only that but sometimes it's nice to read a story with a happy ending instead of the usual "Let's kill the bitch!" stuff and nonsense most of the stories in the loving wives section are about.

Thanks.

jtaylor

Great story

But where is riley's point of view.

1*

Sheesh ! You do like to talk. While not a bad story you drag things out way too much. You re state ideas over & over & over ad nauseum. I was expecting it to end a couple of pages earlier. After a while I started skimming because I couldn't wait for it to be over. Shorten up your stories to keep your readers attention, or lose them.

....I have a quibble or two. First is about the sentencing of Charlie the rapist: "ten to twenty...no parole" -- so which is it? Ten or twenty? He sure as shit deserved twenty!

Second, when the ED issue first started, Oz should have been getting Riley off with mouth music from the get-go, and they should have added dildos pretty quickly. Maybe try a strap-on for Oz so he could do the job even if the flesh was weak.

Still a 5* story with lots of introspection, love, anguish, and renewal. Thanks!

with the thrill of sex but uncommon decency.

Waiting for chapter2

even more pain and darkness. Parts we're hard to read. And I really dislike psychobabble.

For my part I will state the following. If my supposed best friend made his long held lust for my wife as obvious as indicated in this story, I would have ended relationship years ago.

The friend was with wife when husband was absent numerous times over the years and made his desire of wife more than obvious. Add wife's attraction to friend and either you kick friend out of both your lives or end up divorced after friend succeeds with his seduction.

A real friend would not act like a dog!

To anonymous,

Just because someone has honor, doesn't mean he/ she isn't human. Honorable people still have temptations, and still want to be near the things they like, love or lust after. It just means that when the time comes, you will overcome your own desires in order to do what is right. I for one am glad that I'm not your friend, as you lack that same honor.

Now to the author.

A deep and heart wrenching tail of true love overcoming life. A truly well written story that genuinely earns the right to the title "loving wives". However as others have expressed in crass, and depressingly shallow and pessimistic views, this is a porn site and most come to the loving wives catigory for a quick wank. This story would be better placed in romance. I however, feel privileged to have read it (even if I did miss out on my wank.)

This did not turn out to be erotic... it's a nice story with sympathetic, loving characters. However, if one is looking for a shared wife story with which to get off, this is not that.

A tale of a husband, a loving wife and a great friend.

Worth every bit of FIVE STARS

Six pages of great writing on an excellent theme. Who but the most loving wives and husbands did (and did not do) as described here? One reason I liked it so much is precisely that it varies from the monotonous constants of [cheating, exposure, resolution].

Just a very good story. Wasn't sure at first, but it really grew on me. Great job.

5*

Story was OK, but what made it above & beyond was a friend (real friend).

Unlike lot of stories where friend ends up as friend with benefits, this was exceptional.

Ones more... Very Well Done!

First, I don't give a f*ck what you say, she wasn't getting raped, she was getting f*cked. It didn't become rape into the husband get home. She gets raped, she doesn't need counseling and doesn't leave her side, because she didn't want him to remember to look on her face when she was getting plowed from behind. And then you gotta go back to the first incident with the biker, grabbed her ass and called her his bitch. The husband told her what was coming and she still went riding with him anyway. Dog aint your friend either because you can't perform. The thing that gets me is it's only been months. If you can go without for a few months I hate to see you have separated for year, Damn

has got a good bit of it right, I dont remember her face but I doubt holding her hands to handlebars would be unbreakable. but if she got hot aftrer a ride, bet she didnt fight back hard on the bike or in the bedroom.

++ What sort of biker dude starts a fight and doesnt follow thru to the fucking finish????? looking for a cunt(womans) location after the 1st 2-3 blows is amateur shit.

++ No wonder he couldnt get it up; he failed to protect and in doing so left the animal to pleasure himself and the cunt indef or 30 min until puppy got there.

++ riley was a slut, used submissiveness to let herself get "used" like she wanted but allowed herself to feel not responsible for cooperating, for instance, when Puppy called her bitch in the conversation where he could fuck her but not have her heart "she had a strange look on her face when puppy called her bitch." Shes just another slut like all the others on "loving wives" who pretend to be submissive when they are getting what they want but rationalize thats its not their fault.

++ always amazed that females claim to love someone while cheating on them, what kind of rationalization is " its just sex"? not applicable to this story, but really wonder if this is a real life statement when caught? never have understood the littlelest bit of how the female mind/logic works.

I wish I could give more stars than 5.

An excellent read, well-plotted and well put together.

I must admit that I was starting to wonder when his doctor was going to send him to see a trick psychalist.

Imagine my surprise when the advice came from Dog.

One of the few true loving wive stories on this site.

Nobody who isn't a cuck would give up his wife like that. It's a permanent relationship changer as a solution to a temporary problem. Essentially, it's just a riff to try to keep the tension in the story, but it doesn't work. In real life, the vast majority of women would be furious and deeply hurt over what OZ was suggesting. Moreover, no normal husband would do it.

Misses on the start describing a 'dresser' motorcycle and 'chopper' as one and the same. Typically it's one or the other. A 'Dresser' has a fairing, hard saddlebags and a trunk or 'Tour' pak. A chopper typically does not. A chopper can have leather saddle bags........No One every "Drives" a motorcycle. You ride a motorcycle. A 'Rider' is the operator of the bike. The passenger is always that. They are not the 'Rider'.

A pathetic, insecure wimp

Lessee, the docs failed to detect the protagonist's clear brain damage, since he was pushing his wife to fuck someone else who stated he would try to steal her away. Yessir, that was one half wit dude, who needed a lesson about obtaining therapy as opposed to insisting he be cuckolded to solve his problem. It was a creative solution though, but he missed the best bet, he should've cut off his dick, that would've been an even better means of making sure things went right with his wife. Good grief, one of my least favorite characters, mired in insipidly stupid martyrdom.

Way, way , way too long ! I try not to be too critical about someone else's writing so, I'll leave you with a suggestion ; lookup Mark Twain's book about writing stories ; you'll find a treasure in them. Good luck , and keep trying !