Recent reader comments on Erotic Poetry.
Their connection is so strong their thoughts become one.
All Comments/ReplyYou made me shiver from your creamy river. *****
All Comments/ReplyI love the beach scene and the amount of oral going on in this one, can never have too much that.
All Comments/ReplyI love the imagery.
All Comments/ReplyI love the petals and raging storm.
All Comments/ReplyMmmmm Love it
All Comments/ReplyWell done, Mark.
All Comments/ReplyI love this one, everything about it. You made me feel like I was there.
All Comments/ReplyEvocative of the real thing. Well done.
All Comments/Replyblack as a raven you threatened "nevermore"
but you crave our attention just like any whore
I knew you'd return and I pay you, 'cause, see-
unlike any whore your thoughts are free.
and so on.. XIII
All Comments/ReplyCaptured the eagerness we feel when we desire.
All Comments/ReplyI love your writing
All Comments/Replybeautiful love story so cleverly constructed
All Comments/ReplyNo detail left out of shower scene — like reader is fly on the wall, but that is true of many of your prose piece.
All Comments/Replyyou tell a good ode monsieur
All Comments/ReplyIt is beautifully simple and equally arousing.
All Comments/Reply"She did push a paper and asked me to sign,
A credit card application she is pointing to sign" - Funny... :)
All Comments/ReplyI love the imagery and progression in this poem.
“Lost in the maelstrom of rapturous feeling,
Shattering cries as her climax is peaking.”
Sensational.
All Comments/ReplyNice rhyme scheme.
All Comments/ReplyThanks for the comment my dear shynalee :)
All Comments/ReplyIndeed!
All Comments/ReplyVery vulnerable girly lover: love it!!!
All Comments/ReplyYou have a way with words.
All Comments/ReplyHot, beautiful, and awe-inspiring. xoxo
All Comments/ReplySPROING haha Very Original! And I see Pixiehoff, herself wrote you a poem… 5 stars and silver linnings.
All Comments/ReplyHi M, why thank you!
All Comments/ReplyThanks Jeanne. xxx
There were a couple of passages I thought were good and the rest about 70% okay. I was going to spend longer on it but thought it would make a good starting point if I wanted to do more.
All Comments/Replyquite the epic ode = liked
All Comments/Replybeautiful scansion - smiles sweetly
All Comments/ReplyAgreeing with Frodov here, this was really well done!
All Comments/ReplySad but beautifully delivered. xoxo
All Comments/ReplyA Kraken is a mythical creature; cud be a Giant Squid which may grow to 50 meters!!! The first verse , inter alia, states the Kraken has been released....Mythologically young maidens were sacrificed at the altar of Lust of this Sea Monster....thank you for the daring imagery....
All Comments/ReplyThis man is a fool
when he could drool
over your delicious pussy
he goes off to prove he's a wussy.
All Comments/ReplyIt's such a shame, he doesn't want to play,
With the curves that nature, so graciously lay.
The softness of skin, the warmth of embrace,
A treasure chest, a divine, sacred space.
I would drop everything, to spend some time,
With the one who ignites, a fire so divine.
To taste the...
All Comments/ReplyFree choice, so they say, is our right,
But I confess that, try as I might
To reject sexy Mél
Is as stupid as hell
That bloke really is not very bright.
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