by windwriter
I very much enjoyed your story of joy's submission and would love to read more of her story. All the while I was reading it, I was imagining a submissive of Mine, giving herself to Me in such a way. Thank you for sharing it with us.
and very emotionally charged. I love that she was strong and sure of herself enough to give of herself.
Story was very rich in detail, fully displayed the wide range of emotions of the submissive. Loving...very good story.
...to all your comments on this story. As Daniellekitten mentioned in one of her thank you's, it is a mental boost to us as writers. Whether congratulatory or constructive, your comments do make a difference. Writing is a very personal thing, so I take your thoughts to heart when I sit down to write my next story. I wish all of you a blessed holiday and a very prosperous New Year.
Humbly yours,
windwriter
to read. I'm glad you didn't make the woman a brainless slave the minute she committed herself.
One minor point: I thought their conversation was a bit too polite for good friends moving on to being lovers. But that is a minor thing. I enjoyed reading this story.
Good luck.
What a beautiful Christmas present. What a beautiful story. I could relate to Joy and her feelings of submission. You did a wonderful job writing this and I hope to read more.
Beautiful depiction of what a d/s relationship really looks and feels like at its heart. What a lovely gift.
and so loving...shows the true submission of a submissive becoming aware and a Master who know how to bring out the best of his lil one. i love this story and the way it is written...it just doesn't get any better than this. erotic and so true life...fantasy and fiction all the same. i hope to read more from you. you got something here that is for sure. respectfully a fan in Texas
Very well written, nice character development. Also, it was much more than simply a story about sex. It was about a woman who makes a commitment and the man who makes a commitment back. Very well done!