All Comments on 'The Gift of Submission For Xmas'

Very well written, nice character development. Also, it was much more than simply a story about sex. It was about a woman who makes a commitment and the man who makes a commitment back. Very well done!

and so loving...shows the true submission of a submissive becoming aware and a Master who know how to bring out the best of his lil one. i love this story and the way it is written...it just doesn't get any better than this. erotic and so true life...fantasy and fiction all the same. i hope to read more from you. you got something here that is for sure. respectfully a fan in Texas

Beautiful depiction of what a d/s relationship really looks and feels like at its heart. What a lovely gift.

What a beautiful Christmas present. What a beautiful story. I could relate to Joy and her feelings of submission. You did a wonderful job writing this and I hope to read more.

to read. I'm glad you didn't make the woman a brainless slave the minute she committed herself.

One minor point: I thought their conversation was a bit too polite for good friends moving on to being lovers. But that is a minor thing. I enjoyed reading this story.

Good luck.

... in the contest and happy holidays.

Always, E

...to all your comments on this story. As Daniellekitten mentioned in one of her thank you's, it is a mental boost to us as writers. Whether congratulatory or constructive, your comments do make a difference. Writing is a very personal thing, so I take your thoughts to heart when I sit down to write my next story. I wish all of you a blessed holiday and a very prosperous New Year.

Humbly yours,

windwriter

Good luck with the contest.

Cookie :)

Nicely done... good luck with the contest.

Story was very rich in detail, fully displayed the wide range of emotions of the submissive. Loving...very good story.

and very emotionally charged. I love that she was strong and sure of herself enough to give of herself.

Really, stunningly beautiful.

I very much enjoyed your story of joy's submission and would love to read more of her story. All the while I was reading it, I was imagining a submissive of Mine, giving herself to Me in such a way. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Just as first times should be. Thank you