All Comments on 'Of the People'

by Darkniciad

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ausvirgoausvirgoalmost 3 years ago

Loved it.

Not as high drama as some of your stories, however your talent clearly embraces more than high drama.

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 17 years ago
Glad

I finally found the time to read this.

It's a beautiful story about giving in love.

Thank you.

Black Tulip

KewlBlueTigerKewlBlueTigerover 17 years ago
Well thought out!

You've painted these characters with a depth that makes it a really enjoyable read. The pace of the story is well set also, you take enough time with the details and keep things moving along. Nice finish. I haven't read the other installments but this stands alone quite well. Bravo! I'll try and not be such a stranger to your work.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Great story

This was a great read and I'm thrilled you have enjoyed Laresa so much. I've had a pleasure reading your work and having you part of the group. This story is excellent and stands alone very well. Good luck with whatever trails Laresa takes you on. I feel she is taking us all on many. ~ Red

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 17 years ago
Love it.

I think you have a good idea there, Dark. You could write in parallel to Laresa without interfering with what's happening in the chain but allow us (the readers) a deeper glimpse into Laresa's actions within the chain.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
It's a lovely

continuation and a beautiful addition to the Laresa epic. You write so beautifully,Dark. Never stop.

rgraham666rgraham666over 17 years ago
Nice

A lovely comment on the joys of being human. And the sorrows of being supernatural.

Well done.

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