by MnRider
A beautiful contest entry; you made the story come alive. I loved it! Good luck!
Cookie :)
and very well told. I don't usually care that much for a story written in first and second person but this worked well. Keep writing and I will read more of your work.
You have a poet's command of language. I envy that and I echo the praise of the others here.
Rumple
Very good job! This is your first erotic story? You could have fooled me. Sensual & erotic. Good luck to you.
nicely written. You did good for a first time, hell that was good for a tenth time. Good luck in the contest.
I loved it.The visuals were great, the sex was great, and it was very romantic.
It ideally could have something more to do with the holiday season, then just sex that started in the snow. Good luck!
It was a pleasure to edit, and it's a pleasure to read.