All Comments on 'Memories in the Snow'

mother of gawd that just kept me cumming, very nice visuals.

It was a pleasure to edit, and it's a pleasure to read.

yee haw

It ideally could have something more to do with the holiday season, then just sex that started in the snow. Good luck!

I loved it.The visuals were great, the sex was great, and it was very romantic.

nicely written. You did good for a first time, hell that was good for a tenth time. Good luck in the contest.

Very good job! This is your first erotic story? You could have fooled me. Sensual & erotic. Good luck to you.

You have a poet's command of language. I envy that and I echo the praise of the others here.

Rumple

and very well told. I don't usually care that much for a story written in first and second person but this worked well. Keep writing and I will read more of your work.

A beautiful contest entry; you made the story come alive. I loved it! Good luck!

Cookie :)