All Comments on 'Love, Lust, and Chicken Soup'

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sharpie_73sharpie_73about 13 years ago
More!

This is a great story, and I liked that you tweaked and twisted it a tiny bit. Your writing style is unique and I like it! Please write more (and preferably not lesbian, but its your choice!)!

darkstone57darkstone57about 16 years ago
can i have some of that chicken soup

that was so cool. I can only imagine how miserable she must have felt, but to have him come to her and with so much to offer. I don't mean the teddy bear or rose either. Good story, nice sex.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 19 years ago
Now that's a house call

A different sort of romance. But I can't help but wonder if that sort of treatment is covered by her HMO? :)

Rumple

kbatekbateover 19 years ago
Romance at its finest

Any romantic story beginning with "coughed up a lung" is worth a 5 in my book, any day any time!

Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
soup & more...

I liked it! It takes a good man to make a girl feel that wanted while she's sick :)

Bridget69Bridget69over 19 years ago
A different kind of medicine.

A very creative way of curing the common cold indeed. The story was engaging enough, and Mark's gestures were thoughtful ones, although I would have liked to see a more prolonged courtship and for Lisa to be recovered before the actual intimacy took place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice

just loved it

thickandjuicythickandjuicyover 19 years ago
ok good writing but

she was sick ...ew im sorry flu sex ew if they were both sick ok maybe but she was coughing up a lung...come on lol couldnt they have waited till she got better... the only reason why im not giving u a 100

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