All Comments on 'Love, Lust, and Chicken Soup'

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thickandjuicythickandjuicyover 19 years ago
ok good writing but

she was sick ...ew im sorry flu sex ew if they were both sick ok maybe but she was coughing up a lung...come on lol couldnt they have waited till she got better... the only reason why im not giving u a 100

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice

just loved it

Bridget69Bridget69over 19 years ago
A different kind of medicine.

A very creative way of curing the common cold indeed. The story was engaging enough, and Mark's gestures were thoughtful ones, although I would have liked to see a more prolonged courtship and for Lisa to be recovered before the actual intimacy took place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
soup & more...

I liked it! It takes a good man to make a girl feel that wanted while she's sick :)

kbatekbateabout 19 years ago
Romance at its finest

Any romantic story beginning with "coughed up a lung" is worth a 5 in my book, any day any time!

Good work!

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 19 years ago
Now that's a house call

A different sort of romance. But I can't help but wonder if that sort of treatment is covered by her HMO? :)

Rumple

darkstone57darkstone57about 16 years ago
can i have some of that chicken soup

that was so cool. I can only imagine how miserable she must have felt, but to have him come to her and with so much to offer. I don't mean the teddy bear or rose either. Good story, nice sex.

sharpie_73sharpie_73about 13 years ago
More!

This is a great story, and I liked that you tweaked and twisted it a tiny bit. Your writing style is unique and I like it! Please write more (and preferably not lesbian, but its your choice!)!

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