All Comments on 'Inductions Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Encore? Sequel? Please!

You have nothing extraneous in the story, so it is a nice tight read...and the ending bodes well for part three...so I am hoping there is more to come...

barepussloverbarepussloverover 18 years ago
WOW!! More, Please!!!

Very well written, hope there is more to this storyline!! You are blessed with wonderful story telling powers. Please submit more to the Site.

JulesPJulesPover 18 years ago
Just lovely

I love your stories, and can't wait to read the next one. Especially if it's Ava's story.

sacksackover 18 years ago
very hot....

you write sex scenes well, pulling the reader in and never letting go. Good luck in the contest!

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