All Comments on 'Inductions Ch. 02'

you write sex scenes well, pulling the reader in and never letting go. Good luck in the contest!

I love your stories, and can't wait to read the next one. Especially if it's Ava's story.

Very well written, hope there is more to this storyline!! You are blessed with wonderful story telling powers. Please submit more to the Site.

You have nothing extraneous in the story, so it is a nice tight read...and the ending bodes well for part three...so I am hoping there is more to come...