All Comments on 'Gifts From a Spirit'

Concise, to the point, very romantic and uplifting. Your writing is excellent. I look forward to your next post!

I think it would be great if we all had "angels" like this to guide us toward our loved ones. There is another story like this on Literotica by Stefan J. which features almost exactly the same theme. The title escapes me, but it was part of a Halloween contest one year. In it, a girl that was killed in adolescence comes back to life in order to point the male protagonist of the story toward his true love. Are you familiar with it? Thanks for sharing this gem!

I really enjoyed reading this story! It was very well written with a lot of detail. You have the makings of a wonderful author (professional) unless you already are one?

This was sweet. Where can I sign up for one of these angels? That last line is killer. Wow. Good luck!

This is a really nice story. Thank you.

The only thing I would say is it could have used more detail perhaps. I wanted to hear about what happened on their Christmas day, but it was very romantic and perfect for the Holiday season :)

Good luck and Happy Holidays,

Ali

Nice story.. good luck.

Sorry to be the voice of dissent here, but I was totally unimpressed by this story. I found it to be extremely saccharin, often pretentious, and completely predictable. And breaking down such a short story into five or six "chapters" was unnecessary.

I realy loved your story. I hope you write another soon, but I hope there is a little more sex in it. LOL. I wish you luck.

KISSES,

Angel ;)

Another nice little story from you. I enjoyed it very much.

Boyd

Like Dicken's Christmas story. When you see the movie every year, you know how it's going to end, yet you still watch it. Why? Because it makes you feel good. same with your story. It makes you feel good. Thank You. Ronnie W.

... in the contest. It was a sweet story.

Always, E

Don't care it was corny and predicta!ble - I enjoyed it!

Lukas

What a great story!It tells that love and hope still exist, even in this cynical world that we live in nowadays.

And totally wonderful. I will never apologize for being a romantic; if we lose that we become cynical and jaded. Thank you for a fantastic read. Good luck!

Cookie :)

i loved it

is not necessarily a bad thing. LOL

It was a sweet story, but I would have liked to know what happened with their Christmas lunch.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Tony. From a romance lover who absolutely adores happy endings, that was wonderfully done and very sweet and sappy. You deserve a 10. Good luck in the contest.

I really loved this one, too! You write so well that I want to read more. Great Job!

I am almost afraid of cavities :) I can't have Jimmy and Donna play the parts, and now Johnathan Winters can't be the spirit, but Robin Williams still could. Let's see . . .

Lynn

almost too brief.

and perhaps a touch creepy

It hit the spot wonderfully.

Thank you

Nice short story of hope and love. 5/5

Jeez, how am suppose to read when it’s so blurry? What’s the deal? LM

Really good story, as usual.