All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 10'

Go back to your old style of writing

The more recent chapters have reached a complexity that makes me skim rqther than read. Ithink the last four chapters started he down hill run for me.

really like it keep it coming

Nice piece of work. I like it when a story actualy has some character development to it....Of course, the fact that i am on a website such as this makes it rather obvious that i also enjoy some of the ''other aspects'' of these kinds of stories.

You have a good story, keep on telling it.

This was awesome man, I don't care what other people say, it's great. It might be a change of pace, but I like it, and don't let others fool ya, you're doin an excellent job. Just don't forget to write more ; )

i really enjoyed the story plot. i kinda missed what you would write about katie and kristel. i really want to know the sex between them and steve. well grt plot. like to know how the war will be like.

That is one of the best stories i've read on this site, my complements to the writer and i can't wait to see the next one.

i will agree i started reading story for the great sex but your story has developed where it can take over as a'normal' short story dont stop this can go many places keep going with it i dont believe what i am about to say but if you have to leave out sex do so but just keep on writing

keep up the good work, cant wait for the next chapter

Dude, I just read all these stories, and I love it. You have a great talent. The sex is a great part of the story, but the story by it's self is awesome! But I did notice that it was months between each chapter. Don't keep us waiting!!!!!!!!!! I look forward to the next chapter.

Great, you're a great writer, keep up the good work.

commenting on the series as a whole. I really like your work. Great character.

I enjoyed the entire story from start to finish and would really like to see more, if your intent is to continue. I hope it is soon.

i think this should be taken off of literotica.com and put onto fanfiction.net with heavy warnings... this is getting really good

Great story series. Well written. Excellent read.

Great surprise to see you back after the long hiatus.

You did an excellent job of picking up the story line.

Limiting the sex was ok with me. Its the story line that keeps me coming back. You have the knack of writing about all of the problems we would have with such power. The good and the bad and the ramifications of what we do.

Trying to be good is so damn hard and when bad slips in, for the average person, it eats at our soul.

I hope you keep the words coming!

The STORY is what is truely great.....of course some sex is great too...lol

Look forward to your next entry and wish you a "writer's block" free existence. Just use your power...lol

I must say, this is definately one of the best stories out of all of the thousands on this site. and i have been around long enough to have my fair share under my belt. you have the ability to be like those few authors that can keep people captivated by your writing. definately don't quit this! i and many others would be sad to hear it! hehe. and the sex is always fun. u'll figure out how to get back to it eventually. just let it flow

Hope you continue--I really enjoy this.

It's 3 am, Monday morning, I have to be up in 3 hours...Man, oh man, can you write!

But, I'm going to have to hold off on any more episodes until a Friday or Saturday night. Seems I simply haven't the will to extricate myself from your writing.

There is not a better story than this great job would LOVE to see more great story great plot awesome design

And I am also hanging on your every chapter. Please do some more soon! :)

I was surprised finding myself trapped that deep in your story. Sometimes I was kind of disappointed that sex came back in (I don't belive it myself), because I wanted to know more about the background. Gods, super-powers and things like that are very tricky subjects. It is very hard not to sound lame or ridiculously. But you did very well. If you still have the energy to continue, I would be happy to read more. Thanks for writing and sharing.

not what i was looking for when i started,but once i did i couldn't stop.this is like a good book.you just can't stop,you have to keep going.i will be waiting for more with great anticipation.by far the best i have read of anything in a long time.you are truely gifted and greatly appriciated.THANK YOU

I don't get it... your style of writing really throws me... I feel like I want to start writing my own fiction again. Whoever you are, you've inspired me more than any other author on this site... and I DON'T know why.

I've read all ten installments & I can't wait for the next! Please don't leave this story dangling. You've got me hooked!

If every story were as good as this one is, people would read one helluva lot more. Being a native from Phoenix and knowing ever place you escribe makes me feel as though im actually there, witnessing every act in the tale. If you ever publish this, i would be the first to buy it. I definately enjoy the sex scenes, but the fact that it isn't the only thing on the characters minds is refreshing and realistic. I look forward to each and every plot twist, place description and pop culture commentary you make.

Plus the farting scene, while immature, was the funniest scene I have ever read. I literally had to stifle my laughter. Keep up the incredible work.

You know, I've been on this site for a while, but I've never had the urge to leave a comment until now. Your story is without a doubt the best one I've ever read on here. I know it's been a while since your last chapter, but I really hope you write more, or at least bring closure to what's been a really amazing series.

Well done, best story by far.

This is a wonderful story you've got going, but why haven't you continued it? This story needs closure. Don't stop it in mid-conflict. Continue it. Put up the next chapter already. If you don't want to post to Lit, then post to your website. I trust that you do remember you have a website, right?

First comment for all of the stories that I have perused. Yours definately captured and held my attention. I hate to sound greedy, but could you finsh the story. I realize that 10 installments are a lot, but you write well. The inuendoes, snippets of poetry and real life situations make the chapters easy to read. Please continue...

I found myself reading all 10 chapters in one sitting. I did not even care about the sex after the first couple. I found myself engrossed in the story and waiting to find out what happens next. You definitely have a gift and should finish it (another 10 chapters maybe?).

Fantastic story, I sincerely hope you finish it.

omg talk to a publishing company wow i read all 10 chapters religiously please do not stop writing. period. finish this story and write 10 more. im in awe at your linguistic styling and all out skills. your are an incredible author and i have almost know critisism, and im a very cynical person(i think i saw a spelling error or 2, lol) i cant even begin to verbalize my amazement...just...wow

Please continue.

I loved this story great plot excellent character cant wait to read the rest of it

This is a really great story and I truly hope you will continue it as there is a lot left unanswered.

Amazing Story. Great Character developments. Stunning. Please keep going.

loved reading this....you must finish it!!

This is great writing! Uve got some talent! Please write some more!!

Your writing is superb, friend. A writer of your ability deserves larger circulation. You are adept enough that I would not be suprised if you were moonlighting here? I wish I knew what you wrote for your day job. If its fiction, I'd love to read it too. If you don't already write fiction 24-7, then buy a copy of the 2008 writers market and quit the day job so you can write more. I have a basis for comparison for this kind of thing, and you've got skills, kid.

This was the first and best actual erotic story, I have ever read. Whoever you are I sincerely hope you are going to write some more, 'cause you've gotten me addicted!

Great story. First rate.

damn you really hit me with this story! all of it rings so closely with me, it's like you read my mind (lol) but seriously best work on this site by far! please please keep writing! i know it must be anoying to have people ask you again and again to but this story is just tooooooooo cooooool!!!

It would seem that the author has a gift of sorts too, to transport the reader into a detailed and engrossing world. More writing forthcoming would always be appreciated and met with enormous thanks (especially after the non-ending and silghtly anti-climactic finale). I'm saddend though that there may never be any more additions to this saga, as the last installment was written in 2006, I think we can all agree that it's a sad day when a fine piece of writing such as this comes to an end.

Fantastic work. I wonder if u have ever considered it being published in full from a company?

I think u have the creativity to be a great professional author if you are not already.

You can't just leave us hanging like that, you have to finish this.coming to the end of this gave me that same sad feeling you get when you come to the end of an amazing book.

I cant believe you've stopped! Please continue, i literally have the link to this story saved in my file as "The Best Story Evah!" Really! You, my fine friend, are an author to compare to anne Mccaffery, AE von vogt, and Hubbard. Astounding.

My friend....i honestly just spent the last 5 hrs of my life reading through the last 5 chapters of your story...it's now 6am but i just couldn't tear myself away....but the ending....it's absolutely torturous....really..this could be turned into a legitimate novel....and i even dare to hope that one day it might be pulished as such, but I must know....are there any other chapters in the making??? Really, truly, spectacular work. I applaud you and sincerely hope to see more in the near future =).

Writing one of the best stories on the site and then leaving all of us hanging. Try to work around whats hopefully just a writers block and not a death sentence for this novel pretending to be a story.

wow is all i ken say

please i and everyone else begs you to finish it,

the legend i mean,

how does it end.

does he win over himself ,

tell us please i have read an reread your legend.thank you so much

why Literotica should change their rules of submission. There are numerous stories on this site and SOL that never were finished for some reason or other.<p> The sad part is most of these stories were very good, but the author left the readers hanging. Stories should not be accepted by this site or any other unless they are submitted in its entirety.<p> This way the readers can finish a story at their own pace and not have to wait weeks for each chapter to be posted, or worse, as in this case, not finished.

I know it's been...a long time since I've updated and, for those that read this, I felt that I owed it to you to say something. I sincerely apologize to all of you who read this, enjoyed it and were left without a resolution. I will make every attempt to get the story finished and posted. When? I don't know. But I do intend to begin again after just realizing that the beginnings of the final chapter were lost, so that immediately improves the chances that you'll see it sooner rather than later.

Sir you have held/ hold countless lives in your story we are all on tender hooks for a finish or a thousand more chapters please release us with your words

The story was great but Literotica really needs to do something about all these great stories that are never finished

Great storyline! Tbh, I stopped reading the erotic bits (although they were damn hot) cos it's 3 am here and I really wanted to sleep...but the story kept me hooked. A real pleasure to read something that has this much finesse. Glad to hear that you plan to carry on. Also, loved the Oxford reference. Local interest is always a plus...x

Excellent story, I remember reading this some time ago, shortly after its initial posting and wondering when it would bother to be finished. I am happy to see the comment from the author as I can now hold out some hope to a great resolution to one of the best stories on Lit. Keep writing and I will remain a loyal fan. Until then I remain...

Are You going to finish this Story its right there and just waiting to be Finished. Aphrodite,Hermes,or Zeus should be coming into the Picture

Curt

Dear Author,

I Cannot Stress Enough the importance of the conclusion to this story, as a obviously well educated author, finishing this work of art will not only place your ever-so-die-hard-loyal fans curiosity to rest but give you a great sense of accomplishment and joy. As any well rated author might tell you. On a lighter note, very good job, we'll be in touch. (communication, touch might not be the most proper term to use considering the nature of this website)

Anxious To Hear More,

Viking

you should really finish it. no good story is complete without a filling conclusion. Almost like District 9 if you seen the movie you know what I'm talking about.

But thanks for the story

This was a great read and I would love to read the ending. I would guess that there are another 10-15 chapters if not several more books that could be written. I hope that you read these comments and realize that it is a piece worth finishing.

This should be published!!!

... AbbeFaria is planning to finish this excellent story. It would be a real

shame to leave it and us just hanging....

Can I have a hotdog ? We're out of mustard...damn !!

Come on AbbeFaria...FEED ME !!

FYI - I really enjoyed the "first part" of your story...more please. Tanks !

Please continue this story!!!

....A great read thus far!!! I hope you very much decise

To continue this story....

.....and then you stopped -

that's not nice.

Your telling is very good even without the graphic sex. Please continue.

I wish I did not even spend the time to read this. The story was amazing, but thats just it you didn't finish. I just have to say wow it really is a shame all thats plot development all spoiled.

you're not continueing? all that build up to a great internal battle between himself and, as you put it, HIM. not even talking about the gods. if you didn't continue it would be a shame. you've got an amazing story here. i hope that'll inspire you enough to continue, i know i'll be looking for chapter 11.

Come on man, you have SO got to continue this. I just spent six hours trying to remember what it was called to find it again, only to find that only one new chapter had been added in the ages since I last read it! This is one of the best erotic fiction stories I've ever read, you HAVE to finish it!

Ok well I've been waiting for the next chapter to this for quite a while now and it's not looking so good. Any idea when you will begin working on this story again?

You've done a great job with plot and characters and I really enjoyed a lot of the narrator's sardonic side-thoughts. If this were a printed book you could leave the story here - it pretty much stands alone, we know a lot about Steve's situation and can guess much of what he will have to go through. The readers have imaginations; you could leave it to them. Maybe a sequel which also stands alone?

(You need to watch your homonyms and a tendency to use "to much" instead of "too much".) Good work, please keep 'em coming!

I have to say that this is one of the best stories I have read on this site. It would be a great shame for you to not finish it, im looking forward to an ending. This story also makes me wonder how I would fare with those kinds of powers... heh. Who knows eh?

Bitch Bitch Bitch Bitch Bitch Bitch Bitch Bitch MO!

this is one of the best story on literotica....

please continue....

Add me to the list of those thankful for your efforts and hoping for more. This story is truly a Gift From A Talented Author.

Thank You!!

This is a good story with a well developed plot and characters that show signs of development. Keep up the good work and think about publishing to print or ebook format.

More, more, more!

This is the best story I have ever read, including non-sexual ones. I think you should keep the series going. Also, just putting it out there, it would be nice if you queried your audience for suggestions. I've seen that work wonders on both writing speed and ratings.

Yours truly,

¥3n

Waiting for more - hopefully you will come back and write more - PLEASE!

LOVE IT. Whats going to happen with the omelette, thats what we all want to know....

its a good storey your cariters were all well thout out even the lesser ones wich gives the store an almost real vibe. keep it up.

Very nice story, good to see the one given such power actually struggling to stop himself from going too far..

Writers that spend 2 yrs. putting together a very good story. I enjoy a well written, longer story like you've put together. However, I expect a story to be completed. Since it's been 5 years that your last chapter ended, I doubt there will be anymore. That not fair. I wasted alot of time following the story and giving it mostly 5 stars.

its awesome. but you're keeping the rest from us. like withdrawing just on the brink of an orgasm. finish it dude. asap. we're all waiting.. i esp love the mythological angle.. i wish aphrodite would fuck him. :)

I hope you'll continue this. You have a rare gift for character development and a firm grasp of the mythology, and you spin the tale well.

That was brilliant!

Guessing there wont be anymore now since it's been such a long time, that'a a dreadful shame, as I was dying to find out how it ends!

Still, a great story nonetheless.

Thanks!

U should continue! I'm,pardon the pun,dying to know how he deals with his dark and evil persona! Its a shame that we'll never know! By the way,great job to a great story!

you suck to leave us wondering how it will end, finish it.....................

I realize that you have moved on, but many of us would like to see Steve's story work out one way or another. Please think about writing something to give us some closure.

hope this story is going to finish.I couldn't put it down

yes please finish it i know how much time writing good stories can take but please come back

I've heard your cries. I will indeed attempt to get this story finished. It's been a long time but I think the rest of Stephen's story is ready to be told. Wish me luck.

-Abbefaria

I just read all the chapters and I can't wait for the rest of the story: just one thing, I want it to be all tied up with his winning the battle within himself and the battle with the Gods. Any other type of ending would be untenable.

thanks

I must say I just found this meant to read it ages ago... but I read the entirety and would see it continued as well a very good story.

Waiting for the next chapter. Good read.

Please hurry I've read them all and need to continue! It's killing me lol

Ive been reading for a week to find out you havent written anymore in 6 years. We are dying to know what happens. Especially those of us from phoenix. Love the bars on mill street and its nice to connect geologically to a story.

in the Green Mile, the boss is Paul Edgecomb and the big black guy is John Coffey

No leave it there thats a good stopping point. you don't need a ending.

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