All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 10'

A very good story. Please don't leave it there, there are to many unsolved problems. Don't give me the female version of blue balls!!!!!! Finish it and tie up all the loose ends!!!

Now that is a brilliant story that I just read in one sitting. Like a previous commenter said, this is too good a story to stop now. Please continue.

Okay, AbbeFaria, it has been a year now since your last assurance in these comments that you would finish this story. I would think that it's about time for another status update about the progress of the story, or just to let us know you're still alive.

So, how about it? Are we going to get another assurance that you're gonna finish this story or are you actually going to post the next chapter?

By the way, the website you have linked to your profile here is long since gone. Do you have a second option on where we can go to hopefully find something that you keep up to date?

...you actually working on finishing it, or just coming back every few years to say "I'll work on it."?

Because it's pretty good stuff, save for how sometimes half the page ends up italicized...and how it's not finished. -_-

the story was going on nicely, why did you have to stop it. continue the story dude, you were doing a nice job

The most gripping of all the Mind Control stories i have ever read. too bad tha there are no new postings from 2006. please be back again.....

I'm WAITING!!

O.K., don't get me wrong I LOVED this story, but have you noticed that most if not all really good long stories just stop, like all the authors just disappeared off the face of the planet? It's just sad really.

This is such a great story, I would have bought this book and every one that followed, that I hoped was going to be a long series!

I love this story but will you ever finish it? I've written to you but I heard nothing back.

Like I said, you'll never finish this, RIGHT? My only question is WHY?

Like most on here you suck start a good story and never finish it LOL

drinking cum too. He sucks everything. I gave you a5 for your story

Why invest so much of your time then never finish the story? Writers block? You suck.

Chapter 11 is up to 15 pages so far. It's in progress.

Can you post what you currently have of Ch. 11? I remember reading this almost 10 years ago, and coming back now to see if it was finished. I don't want to forget about it again. It is a great story and I want to see what will happen.

I've had writers block for a year now myself. Cut Abbe some slack people! try writing a couple chapters from your imagination and see what I mean. Personally I'm willing to wait for the next offerings!

Thanks

Jack

With 15 pages written, you could have given us chapters 11, 12 and 13 of 5 pages each.... what on earth are you waiting for???

I am enjoying your talent and waiting impatiently for your next effort.

Don't know what's keeping you from writing more... Want to know what happened.

Good to know I'm not the only one who came back to check on this story like 10 years later. Bruh. You're worse than George Martin lol

Don't leave me hanging plus I need another chapter it's like crack!! :)

keep up the good work :P

He wrote ch. 10 over a decade ago. I think it's safe to assume that the story will never be finished by him.

It is a shame that this story was never finished. It left us or at least me wanting to know how he would solve his dilemma. Perhaps some other author to pick up the story and continue

You have a really good story going her, but (and this is a bit of my hang-up more than yours) then/than, please learn the difference.

Please don't leave us hanging!! We want an ending!

And to/too

pTc

If you're not going to finish a story, don't fucking post it.

Wonderfully done and very well written! If you ever come back, please continue this amazing story! Thank you!

Except for all the spelling mistakes. That detracts quite a bit from the story.

OMG! It just ends here?!?!?! :-(

Why did you lie?

You said this was a complete series

I really hate that and liars

WHAT DO YOU MEAN THIS IS THE LAST ONE??? This needs sooooo much more.

you could have at least finished the s3x scene before Kristel's nightmare scene. I mean, this is an erotic story site.

and yeah, clean up the spelling and grammar dude. you're using speech to text aren't you?

Overall, good story. It ended poorly, imo, but it was fairly engaging throughout. I only regret that there wasn't much character development as our protagonist went from one scene to the next without much in the way of answers or explanations. Definitely a fun read and something that'll make you think. It needs another hundred chapters, though.

I think that the story needs to be continued and come to an acceptable end

Good story. The conflict leaves lot for furtherance.