by Rediger
sO LUCKY: tO HAVE ONES FORTUNES REVERSED BUT A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS.
My acts involving saving animals but this guy was tru;ly lucky
I loved this. It was very well written with great details. Awesome job, and I look forward to more stories by the same author, wither they take part from this story or not.
Well written, wonderful development of the main characters, exciting, sexy, in a word EXCEPTIONAL!
Please write some more stories.
Simply put.....a cinderella story with sex......something we all wish we had!
rocking story........fast paced.......great wrk.........plz keep writing
This is a great story that makes you believe in Love, Magic, Fate and Human nature again. After you finish reading it you just want to say " I Believe I Believe" without caring about the looks from the other people in the room ars giving you.
Really liked it. Good writing and story. I rarely read stories more than 2 pages but yours kept me going. Keep them coming.
First of let me say that this is a good read. Better then some I have read.
My only critiques are that the characters a bit one dimensional and the dialogue seems a bit forced in places. The bones of a really good extended story are here and there are places where the story can be expanded. A lot of potential in this.
Needs another chapter. This could actually happen, maybe they'll have children...
Me, I think it ended at the right place, Leave'Um wanting more.
anything more would become trite and run of the mill
Wonder about Jacob and the beads,
Maybe there is a spinoff there
Great story and I too agree with the comments below you finished the story perfectly.