by darkgoddess2478
Very macabre but brilliant! I won't even pretend to understand it all - but it is an interesting story and unbelievable!
and deadlier than their visionsA. TK U MLJ LV NV
I thought it was good! Kind of reminded me of The Lazarus Heart, by Poppy Z. Brite. Good, gruesome revenge.
I don't think the butler saw Allison. I think Allison was in bed with Bailey. Alicia was the one who killed Jason. Especially with the creepy face thing she had going when she was goring him.
Is that the butler saw her! Otherwise, it would have been a perfect retribution story.
reminded me of the movie The Cell...which I loved but it also was way over the top. You are good...Good luck with the contest.
and although I think he deserved to die, this was a bit overboard for me. (and you are going to give a lot of people nightmares!)