All Comments on 'Eviscerated Love'

by darkgoddess2478

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sacksackover 18 years ago
now that's gruesome.....

and although I think he deserved to die, this was a bit overboard for me. (and you are going to give a lot of people nightmares!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I agree...

reminded me of the movie The Cell...which I loved but it also was way over the top. You are good...Good luck with the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
the Only Problem..

Is that the butler saw her! Otherwise, it would have been a perfect retribution story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I don't know

I don't think the butler saw Allison. I think Allison was in bed with Bailey. Alicia was the one who killed Jason. Especially with the creepy face thing she had going when she was goring him.

JohnB73JohnB73over 18 years ago
Good n' gruesome!

I thought it was good! Kind of reminded me of The Lazarus Heart, by Poppy Z. Brite. Good, gruesome revenge.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE BLACK ARTS ARE MYSTERIOUS

and deadlier than their visionsA. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Brilaintly written!

Very macabre but brilliant! I won't even pretend to understand it all - but it is an interesting story and unbelievable!

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