by darkgoddess2478
and although I think he deserved to die, this was a bit overboard for me. (and you are going to give a lot of people nightmares!)
reminded me of the movie The Cell...which I loved but it also was way over the top. You are good...Good luck with the contest.
Is that the butler saw her! Otherwise, it would have been a perfect retribution story.
I don't think the butler saw Allison. I think Allison was in bed with Bailey. Alicia was the one who killed Jason. Especially with the creepy face thing she had going when she was goring him.
I thought it was good! Kind of reminded me of The Lazarus Heart, by Poppy Z. Brite. Good, gruesome revenge.
and deadlier than their visionsA. TK U MLJ LV NV
Very macabre but brilliant! I won't even pretend to understand it all - but it is an interesting story and unbelievable!