All Comments on 'Down the Long Empty Nights'

Where are the tags? This should be under lesbian sex. And maybe where you're from... But where I'm from a woman doe not get head a man does. A woman gets eaten. Referencing when she was watching her giving her head. That was when I stopped reading. Tags. Tags. Tags.

Doesn't this belong in lesbian sex? Disappointed. Notice you write a lot about lesbians.

I wish I could write as well as you. I have so many ideas and stories that never get finished. I usualy like black on white F-f however your writing is so good I like to read all of your stories knowing it will be something different. This story had me curious more than turned on. It was very realistic.

Pr11ncess

Love this. Seems similar to the narrative and literary style of Jewelle Gomez's The Gilda Stories. :-) Thank you!

hallo colleen,

your stories are realy nice, love how much fantasy you have some times a

little naughty but thats okay love it too.

from a fan in europe

winfried

Quite beautiful --- I generally detest vampire tales, but still ... quite beautiful.

...nothing against your usual lesbian stories, but branching out is good too. Nice shake-up. Well done, particularly the Q and A toward the end.

As always, your writing is superb. I particularly liked the time you took to reveal more of Erin's character.

Just dropping in to say I liked your story :) Very interesting from beginning to end. Good luck with the contest :)

This is a sure bet to win in the Halloween Contest ~ fantastic tale. All the right elements for a dark, scary, sexy story...

~Honey

dark and moody. I, surprisingly, read it in one sitting. As good as it was, I thought there might have been a bit too much detail in some things, such as descriptions of costumes. A small quibble.

As usual your writing is superb. There wasn't a great deal of sex in this one, something many of us look for in these stories. Nonetheless it was excellent.

As a side comment, I hope you continue with the heterosexual interracial stories despite some of the moronic racist comments left for "Tee Time". That story was every bit as good as this one.

is perhaps the category, but you portrayed a very attractive being with this vampire. Almost human enough to befriend her.

Beautiful story. Good luck.

Black Tulip

In so many different ways. Excellent story and superb execution as always. Well done, Colly.

like me <grin> nice read and true to litEROTICA...a swell pen you wheeled <grin> thanks...good luck and happy halloween

This ends beautifully with interlacing themes of control, release, responsibility and daring. The gift of the mysterious dark lady is a superb one, and the image of her influence rippling out through the pleasures of the humans around her is enticing and oddly tender. Fine work - as one learns to expect, of course, from Ms. Thomas. She never dissapoints.

It started off so poetically that I thought it would go way over my head! ;-) Wonderfully descriptive and the characters voices were believably portrayed. Nice.

... per usual. Good luck in the contest, Colly! ~Imp

An incredible opening. Not that the rest wasn't good, but that section was a textbook example of how it should be done. You also did a fine job of setting the various scenes. Bottom line, a Colly-quality read.

Rumple

i can't tell you how many times i've read a really great story then scrolled back up to find that you were the author. thanks for consistently delivering great pieces.

Can really sink your teeth into this one! (couldn't resist! :) Very nicely paced, well written. Good luck!

Brilliant Colly, but I expect no less from you. Loved the intro, sucked me in after just a few lines and had me hooked. Bravo.

CD

...and this story is no exception. Beautiful details and overall a very sensuous atmosphere carried effortlessly throughout. Brava!

"...euphoric waves..."

There always seems to be that one phrase that makes a story. This was one of many. Great job on a tale of non human that seemed so very human.

Kudos!

with the eroticism that can only come from a walk on the undead side of life. I loved it. A definite winner.

A wonderful story, anticipation and build up were the perfect draw to the delicious climax. Great story, as always. Well done. Mat xx

Beautifully erotic. Well done!

Fantastic details, emotions and descriptions. I felt like I was there. Great job Colly!

A very good story.

The build up to the climax, the unreality and unease of the situation was very nicely done. The central character's emotions were transmitted well to the reader.

The sets that the action took place in was very good. I could see them and they added well to the mood.

Well done!

held my attention throughout, a novel concept expertly realized. Good luck!

What a delightfully dark romance, very discriptive and highly erotic.