by Megnificent1
A fast paced, fun read. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
I think the story was very well written and to the point. Good going Meg. - Derek
I thought the story was wonderful. The pace was nice and easy, nothing felt too rushed. The erotica was real. By real, I mean like it didn't read like a badly-scripted porn where it's all "hi i'm the plumber" and "oh well thats nice lets fuck" type deal.
The ideas during the "party" were very creative. I plan to use a few myself on my significant other. I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again.
Overall, I gave the story a 5 and it's a story that would very much warm me up during the cold holidays. :)
Enjoyed this little hot and sweet story. Keep writing, Megnificent! Dazzle us with more of your holiday sweets!
I really liked your use of the holiday in this story. You showed us the true meaning of Christmas!
... in the contest. I agree with some of the others I would have panned it out alittle more but I did like the story idea. Happy holidays.
Always, E
I would have fleshed it out a little (pardon the pun!)...thanks for sharing!