by Megnificent1
I would have fleshed it out a little (pardon the pun!)...thanks for sharing!
... in the contest. I agree with some of the others I would have panned it out alittle more but I did like the story idea. Happy holidays.
Always, E
I really liked your use of the holiday in this story. You showed us the true meaning of Christmas!
Enjoyed this little hot and sweet story. Keep writing, Megnificent! Dazzle us with more of your holiday sweets!
I thought the story was wonderful. The pace was nice and easy, nothing felt too rushed. The erotica was real. By real, I mean like it didn't read like a badly-scripted porn where it's all "hi i'm the plumber" and "oh well thats nice lets fuck" type deal.
The ideas during the "party" were very creative. I plan to use a few myself on my significant other. I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again.
Overall, I gave the story a 5 and it's a story that would very much warm me up during the cold holidays. :)
I think the story was very well written and to the point. Good going Meg. - Derek
A fast paced, fun read. Good luck in the contest.
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