All Comments on 'Candy Cane Caresses'

by Megnificent1

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Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Interesting

Interesting idea! Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not badly written

but kinda short. Great luck in the contest..

sacksackover 18 years ago
original idea.....

I would have fleshed it out a little (pardon the pun!)...thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good luck...

... in the contest. I agree with some of the others I would have panned it out alittle more but I did like the story idea. Happy holidays.

Always, E

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
Short...

But cute. Good luck!

Cookie :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very good story!

I really liked your use of the holiday in this story. You showed us the true meaning of Christmas!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot and Sweet

Enjoyed this little hot and sweet story. Keep writing, Megnificent! Dazzle us with more of your holiday sweets!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A happy holiday, indeed

I thought the story was wonderful. The pace was nice and easy, nothing felt too rushed. The erotica was real. By real, I mean like it didn't read like a badly-scripted porn where it's all "hi i'm the plumber" and "oh well thats nice lets fuck" type deal.

The ideas during the "party" were very creative. I plan to use a few myself on my significant other. I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again.

Overall, I gave the story a 5 and it's a story that would very much warm me up during the cold holidays. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good stuff Meg

I think the story was very well written and to the point. Good going Meg. - Derek

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
How do I get on that invitation list?

A fast paced, fun read. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

mike77769mike77769almost 9 years ago
WOW

Really hot story!

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