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elfin_odalisquealmost 18 years agoPassionate
Thought the mystery and erotic tension was well done.
Struggled with the idea of her 'getting erect' - perhaps another word would have been better.
Good luck in the contest.
MayhemLassalmost 18 years agoexcellent read ...
imagry was crisp, enticing and made me feel as if I were there. Good luck in the contest!
RedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years agoThanks!!!
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