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RedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years agoThanks!!!
Your story has been mentioned on the New Story Reveiw thread found on Lit's Author's Hangout forum in the Bulletin Boards. ~ Red
MayhemLassalmost 18 years agoexcellent read ...
imagry was crisp, enticing and made me feel as if I were there. Good luck in the contest!
elfin_odalisquealmost 18 years agoPassionate
Thought the mystery and erotic tension was well done.
Struggled with the idea of her 'getting erect' - perhaps another word would have been better.
Good luck in the contest.
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