by Lady Malachite
Why did you hurry the end? The mother was a witch? You said they couldn’t be a witch without a familiar and hers was drowned and yet she could raise the dead? Plus I don’t trust the wizard. Some unanswered questions.
Fantastic imagery and nicely developed characters.Good luck in the contest.
My Lady
I always turn to you for something imaginative, erotic and entertaining, as well as well-written. This is up to your usual standard my dear.
I really enjoyed the way the characters were portrayed and the imagery was excellent. Good luck in the contest.
Not a reader in this cat (no pun intended :) normally... but you may have made me a convert! I LOVE this title, and I love Ruby! Good luck, Mal!
Ruby (and indeed the other characters) are believable and extremely well described. I felt like I was a "fly on the wall" throughout. Good luck in the contest!
As usual, My Lady hits the occult nail, square on the head!
Popparocker
Great stlye, lovely mixture of spells and worldly ways.
Tis a sad ending though.