by Lady Malachite
Great stlye, lovely mixture of spells and worldly ways.
Tis a sad ending though.
As usual, My Lady hits the occult nail, square on the head!
Popparocker
Ruby (and indeed the other characters) are believable and extremely well described. I felt like I was a "fly on the wall" throughout. Good luck in the contest!
Not a reader in this cat (no pun intended :) normally... but you may have made me a convert! I LOVE this title, and I love Ruby! Good luck, Mal!
I really enjoyed the way the characters were portrayed and the imagery was excellent. Good luck in the contest.
My Lady
I always turn to you for something imaginative, erotic and entertaining, as well as well-written. This is up to your usual standard my dear.
Fantastic imagery and nicely developed characters.Good luck in the contest.
Why did you hurry the end? The mother was a witch? You said they couldn’t be a witch without a familiar and hers was drowned and yet she could raise the dead? Plus I don’t trust the wizard. Some unanswered questions.