by Cordelia
I really enjoyed the minimalist nature of this work -- the feeling of glimpses, moments, fragments of memory caught in a breeze, tied together only with a common word.
wrote an artwork of a poem that conveys your sensual, painterly vision. I got to this--
your words
paint upon my monotonous sky
a crescent moon
spilling
fog onto skyline?s jut
and gave you the five, lol. The pacing is perfect, too. And I agree with Jim, the "Still" is alluded to in both form and content. Do you think your sense of pace has been affected by doing live readings? Anyway, ever wonderful dear lady.
xo Ange
of a write. I do enjoy reading your work. I echo Ice's words.
the unspoken "still" beginning each part, yet all parts united in the flow. Well done.
jim :)
It's really hard to write a good public comment while speechless. I say no more.
I've been reading still poetry all day, and I thought they couldn't get any better. This is excellent.
or where you want me to go. But it's definitely movement. I don't know how this poem is titled "still".