All Comments on 'still'

or where you want me to go. But it's definitely movement. I don't know how this poem is titled "still".

I've been reading still poetry all day, and I thought they couldn't get any better. This is excellent.

It's really hard to write a good public comment while speechless. I say no more.

the unspoken "still" beginning each part, yet all parts united in the flow. Well done.

jim :)

of a write. I do enjoy reading your work. I echo Ice's words.

wrote an artwork of a poem that conveys your sensual, painterly vision. I got to this--

your words

paint upon my monotonous sky

a crescent moon

spilling

fog onto skyline?s jut

and gave you the five, lol. The pacing is perfect, too. And I agree with Jim, the "Still" is alluded to in both form and content. Do you think your sense of pace has been affected by doing live readings? Anyway, ever wonderful dear lady.

xo Ange

I really enjoyed the minimalist nature of this work -- the feeling of glimpses, moments, fragments of memory caught in a breeze, tied together only with a common word.