by minsue
Dark passions at play here are so well illustrated by this foreboding black Photo. The blue moon sets the mood for this dark and passionate piece.
I loved the whole atmosphere of the poem. The darkness and the acceptance worked well. And then there's the helplessness. I wonder if the poem speaks in the same way to everybody.
And beautiful picture.
nice to see that you have expressed something with such great meaning in a different way!
Winemaster
alliterations. Gravitas was predictable and stuffy. Lunar lunatic was overkill. But good idea and colors. Still, I prefer Molten and especially Shadowlands.
I liked this style. It made me think of someone typing this poem, throwing it out and someone else finding it...the way the paper was marked, reminded me of crinkled lines..
I loved this ~ "enthralled by the weight of your words" ~
Very nice!!
~Honey
Dark and foreboding, just loved it. You deserved and "E" for this poem...a mini-masterpiece!
Sack
It is a good poem to illustration, but I would like it even better if you would reconsider the dark fancy lettering because it really is very hard to see such a good poem in all that darkness.
This is an example of 40 words being worth a picture.
A nice poem here that applies to most of us.
Your Poem was mentioned on the thread
'New Poems Reviews'
thanks for the journey~
I have no idea what brought this on, but I loved it.
"Tidal torments . . ." Superb line.
mismused
I loved the words, and I loved the image. The font was a bit hard on the eyes, though. ~Imp
YES, YES, YES!
everything fits, so well.
Sends a shiver, with the thought of receiving this
as a card - A hallmark from hell