- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Pie Chart Heart
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Click hereTriangle wedges of women
People you "hold places for"
This is what your emotions look like on paper
Pie chart heart
A large section for her
Maybe a sliver for me
Maybe less
Maybe more
Pie chart heart
Is it wrong for me to despise
The power she still has over you
And wish I had
Even a quarter of her influence
Pie chart heart
Some of us look at love
As something more pleasing to the eye
And a little less business-like
A Picasso, a "Where's Waldo?"
A work of undefinable art
Pie chart heart
I don't want to be that wedge on your chart
I'm all in and can only wish you were the same
Matters such as these are never simple
But I know I simply don't want to be a part
Of your simple, graytone pie chart heart.
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyover 17 years agoLove the idea. I feel your pain and you paint a vivid picture. I agree with Maria, tighten it up and it will come together freshly baked with a lil steam blown from the top ~
Nice reading you and Thank you for the great image ...
Anonymousover 17 years agoI like the metaphor of the 'pie chart heart'
an innovative poem, much enjoyed
mentioned in today's new poem reviews
Maria2394over 17 years agoI think the poem itself could be tightened up; lose a few unnecessary words, lose the quote marks in the first part. It is effective without them and they are distracting.
I love the idea you have presented and the way you have done it. I sort of know how you feel.
Hope you keep writing and submitting--, I will make sure to read your work
maria
