All Comments on 'Pie Chart Heart'

I think the poem itself could be tightened up; lose a few unnecessary words, lose the quote marks in the first part. It is effective without them and they are distracting.

I love the idea you have presented and the way you have done it. I sort of know how you feel.

Hope you keep writing and submitting--, I will make sure to read your work

maria

I like the metaphor of the 'pie chart heart'

an innovative poem, much enjoyed

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Love the idea. I feel your pain and you paint a vivid picture. I agree with Maria, tighten it up and it will come together freshly baked with a lil steam blown from the top ~

Nice reading you and Thank you for the great image ...