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Alternate Ending
In the final decade of man’s existence, people take up smoking again, compete to deflower remaining virgins. Meanwhile, a miniscule subculture—recovering addicts, nuns from defunct orders, former self-mutilators, and precocious children—embarks on a monumental project. They cover the inundated globe with water-lilies hearty enough to outlast their cultivators.
II.
Feeling Inside the Box
20,000 of you are inside the box with a Pizza Hut, two first-run theaters and a mental hospital with one prescribing physician. Outside the box is sand, the sound of mortar. On Christmas, your wives telephone to confess their infidelities. Still, you could take yourselves on a fine date: dinner, a movie, Prozac.
III.
Caught on Tape
At the push of a button, the lithe algorithm sidles up to the processor and makes it do its dance. Data swim through equations, fertilizing variables. There’s a voice behind all of this, the word holy repeated several times, though no one’s bothered to translate it. Men gather round the screen to watch their monster being born as math.
IV.
All Realism is Science Fiction
On the day that they gave her someone else’s face, she used the stranger’s lips to kiss the one she had secretly loved since childhood. She had reckoned on the scars, of course, and the pain, the patchwork way she would look, but she had not anticipated the aftertaste of courage left in the dead woman’s mouth.
V.
No Love Lost
Entropy may be the macro reality, but there are consolations: energy, for example, is like Saul converted. Why not the output of the heart? Here, then, is love as she transacts: broken flower pot, slaughtered pet, reams of regrettable prose, and other, better varieties of love.
Yes, very engaging, held me the whole way through and back again- thanks for sharing!
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LittleMinna is back! Welcome, and hang around awhile!
I particularly enjoyed IV and V but each valentine was a delight to pore over, like discovering the hearts and flowers in I. And anyone that uses "data" as a plural noun gets a candy kiss from me!
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Yes, why not? All effective snippets telling just about enough of just about the right things to come alive. I'd love to see all those embryos of stories framed by a single novel or novella frame. I'd read it.
Different from your others (the few you have shared . . . are you stingy, or is it that you just don't write enough?).
Your comfort and grace in using this form tells me you are far from an inexperienced writer (though that was already obvious from your poems). The language is very well-handled, as are the thought patterns -- both mature, writing-wise.
This was a fine read, hidden as are all the gems here, among jagged rocks. How nice to come across one to actually read more than once every now and then.
Hey, how about posting poems a little more often? Your writing makes me greedy.
...number IV is superb. I very much liked the different style.
Thanks! Write more. All of your work is very good.