All Comments on 'Various Valentines'

...number IV is superb. I very much liked the different style.

Thanks! Write more. All of your work is very good.

Different from your others (the few you have shared . . . are you stingy, or is it that you just don't write enough?).

Your comfort and grace in using this form tells me you are far from an inexperienced writer (though that was already obvious from your poems). The language is very well-handled, as are the thought patterns -- both mature, writing-wise.

This was a fine read, hidden as are all the gems here, among jagged rocks. How nice to come across one to actually read more than once every now and then.

Hey, how about posting poems a little more often? Your writing makes me greedy.

Yes, why not? All effective snippets telling just about enough of just about the right things to come alive. I'd love to see all those embryos of stories framed by a single novel or novella frame. I'd read it.

LittleMinna is back! Welcome, and hang around awhile!

I particularly enjoyed IV and V but each valentine was a delight to pore over, like discovering the hearts and flowers in I. And anyone that uses "data" as a plural noun gets a candy kiss from me!

Fly

Yes, very engaging, held me the whole way through and back again- thanks for sharing!

~as