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Mom and Dad
Brother and Sister
God
Apple Pie
Lo Mein
Macaroni and Cheese
Black Raspberry Ice Cream
Red Sox
Puffy Clouds
Tulips
Icicles
"Special" Children
Pets
Gardens
Waterfalls
Spring Crocus
Summer Roses
Fall Leaves
Winter Snow
Helping
Teaching
Growing
Praying
Friends
Lovers
Sex
Relationships
Angeline
Wicked Eve
Lauren Hynde
Liar
Birth
Childhood
Maturity
Death
You
Mom and Dad
Brother and Sister
God
You
God
You
What an inventory of delights in this enjoyable rendering. As for as pandering: I say pander, smander: Who cares! God Bless!
in response to "shameless pandering"...I think you need to look up pandering in the dictionary. I have every right to mention poets that have supported me and made my life more delightful. Nothing in return is expected, as in every other case when I've mentioned poets/writers on Literotica. The poem is just a lighthearted list of things that make me happy and was never intended to be profound. We need to be careful in judging works that are clearly "lighter" in texture as if they were involved sonnets or Yeats. Not fair to the poet, and this commenter in particular, knows much better.
Not the greatest poem but I suspect it wasn't intended to be much more than the Rhyme Time froth & bubble.
I then reflected that it might be a mercy that it would quite difficult for Sack to rhyme almost anything with twelveoone !
Angeline
Wicked Eve
Lauren Hynde
Liar
shameless pandering, in what is a weak offering