The Delights of Life

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You
Mom and Dad
Brother and Sister
God

Apple Pie
Lo Mein
Macaroni and Cheese
Black Raspberry Ice Cream

Red Sox
Puffy Clouds
Tulips
Icicles

"Special" Children
Pets
Gardens
Waterfalls

Spring Crocus
Summer Roses
Fall Leaves
Winter Snow

Helping
Teaching
Growing
Praying

Friends
Lovers
Sex
Relationships

Angeline
Wicked Eve
Lauren Hynde
Liar

Birth
Childhood
Maturity
Death

You
Mom and Dad
Brother and Sister
God

You

God

You

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Affectionate.

What an inventory of delights in this enjoyable rendering. As for as pandering: I say pander, smander: Who cares! God Bless!

sacksackabout 19 years agoAuthor
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in response to "shameless pandering"...I think you need to look up pandering in the dictionary. I have every right to mention poets that have supported me and made my life more delightful. Nothing in return is expected, as in every other case when I've mentioned poets/writers on Literotica. The poem is just a lighthearted list of things that make me happy and was never intended to be profound. We need to be careful in judging works that are clearly "lighter" in texture as if they were involved sonnets or Yeats. Not fair to the poet, and this commenter in particular, knows much better.

ishtatishtatabout 19 years ago
Fire Extinguishment?

Not the greatest poem but I suspect it wasn't intended to be much more than the Rhyme Time froth & bubble.

I then reflected that it might be a mercy that it would quite difficult for Sack to rhyme almost anything with twelveoone !

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 19 years ago
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Angeline

Wicked Eve

Lauren Hynde

Liar

shameless pandering, in what is a weak offering

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
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