All Comments on 'The Delights of Life'

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Angeline

Wicked Eve

Lauren Hynde

Liar

shameless pandering, in what is a weak offering

Not the greatest poem but I suspect it wasn't intended to be much more than the Rhyme Time froth & bubble.

I then reflected that it might be a mercy that it would quite difficult for Sack to rhyme almost anything with twelveoone !

in response to "shameless pandering"...I think you need to look up pandering in the dictionary. I have every right to mention poets that have supported me and made my life more delightful. Nothing in return is expected, as in every other case when I've mentioned poets/writers on Literotica. The poem is just a lighthearted list of things that make me happy and was never intended to be profound. We need to be careful in judging works that are clearly "lighter" in texture as if they were involved sonnets or Yeats. Not fair to the poet, and this commenter in particular, knows much better.

What an inventory of delights in this enjoyable rendering. As for as pandering: I say pander, smander: Who cares! God Bless!