- Erotic Poetry
- The Soft Caress of the Fingertips
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Click hereThe soft sensual caresses
of my fingertips
upon her bare smooth thighs
awakening the sensual secret sensations
deep in her sensuous heart
lust
glistening in the flickering candle light
love
ushers her soft tender hand
together with mine
our lips meet
arousing our deep and
enshrouded desires and needs
the simple light caress
of a my fingertips
upon her naked flesh
opens her senses
to the tremendous world of passion
of lust, and of love.
- COMMENTS
Du Lacabout 19 years agoI really felt the "sensuality" of this poem. It was slow, strong and enticing. The only thing I would change is the first stanza:
quote:
The soft sensual caresses
of my fingertips
upon her bare smooth thighs
awakening the sensual secret sensations
deep in her sensuous heart
while I like the line awakening the sensual secret sensations.. you use sensual too many times find another word.. it loses the potency when replicated sensual, sensuous etc. too much in such a short space. Otherwise HMMM yeah... I Loved it.. very Valentine Day ish!
thank you for the read..
Du~
