All Comments on 'The Soft Caress of the Fingertips'

erotic extreme,,, bravo

very nice poem chez~

I echo MET"s sentiments, erotic indeed! :)

I really felt the "sensuality" of this poem. It was slow, strong and enticing. The only thing I would change is the first stanza:

quote:

The soft sensual caresses

of my fingertips

upon her bare smooth thighs

awakening the sensual secret sensations

deep in her sensuous heart

while I like the line awakening the sensual secret sensations.. you use sensual too many times find another word.. it loses the potency when replicated sensual, sensuous etc. too much in such a short space. Otherwise HMMM yeah... I Loved it.. very Valentine Day ish!

thank you for the read..

Du~

Conveys so much passion in just a few lines. Very enticing!