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White-Black
(reflections on a power outage)


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Beautiful soft
White limb heavy
Trees bow low
And yield to fate.

Light becomes
Black becomes cold

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Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
Out go the lights..

Letter of the day for this poem is..

P

perfect

powerless

purgatory

purge

penetrating

profound

Pandora's box.. simplicity reigns..

ty for the write!

Du~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice work

I especially enjoyed the simplicity of the last stanza.

Thanks.

sacksackabout 19 years ago
This is a good first submission.....

At least, I am assuming it is your first poem here. Is that supposed to be a power grid? The section with becomes is a bit awkward because of the repeat of that word. And, perhaps this could have been a bit longer and the more powerful thereby. Keep up the good work!

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