All Comments on 'White-Black'

At least, I am assuming it is your first poem here. Is that supposed to be a power grid? The section with becomes is a bit awkward because of the repeat of that word. And, perhaps this could have been a bit longer and the more powerful thereby. Keep up the good work!

I especially enjoyed the simplicity of the last stanza.

Thanks.

Letter of the day for this poem is..

P

perfect

powerless

purgatory

purge

penetrating

profound

Pandora's box.. simplicity reigns..

ty for the write!

Du~