- Erotic Poetry
- I just want to be fucked
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Click hereI'm not asking you to love me
I don't really care
I'm just asking you to fuck me
I don't want sweet kisses
Or slow sweet gentle strokes
I don't want soft caresses down my spine
I want you to grab my tits roughly
Pinch my nipples and bite my neck
I want you to rub your hard cock against me
And call me your little slut
Then ram it deep inside me
Fast and hard and swift
Thrusting in and out
Grunting like an animal in heat
You don't need sweet words
Soft kisses will do nothing for me
I don't need your tenderness tonight
I simply need to cum
Exploding, screaming in the heat of passion
Not climaxing quitley on rolling waves
You don't have to love me
I just want to be fucked
- COMMENTS
Super_Geniusover 19 years agoAuthorThanks, everyone, for your criticisms. To Wickedeve, she's not settling, she'd heeding a baser desire. Oftentimes, we all need to do so. Again, thanks all. *Super_Genius
Trent_Dutchover 19 years agoYour Poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Reviews for Tuesday 1st of February.
Jennifer Cover 19 years agoIt's deffinately a poem with alot of potential, and sometimes we ladies just want to get fucked and there aint no shame in that!!
WickedEveover 19 years agoOne that has the potential for improvement with a few good revisions.
Here is one part of your poem that does work:
"Not climaxing quitley (quietly) on rolling waves
You don't have to love me
I just want to be fucked"
The first line isn't bad at all. It is poetic.
The last two lines are simple, yet powerful. I'm not sure if I should feel sad that you're settling for a fuck without love, or if I should be saying, "You go girl!" because sometimes, you just want to be fucked and you're a woman who doesn't mince words when it comes to that.
Keep writing and growing. :)
cavu182over 19 years agopretty basic, not quite poetry, but a nice thought none the less... (wouldn't we all?)
