All Comments on 'I just want to be fucked'

Would be hot to recieve this note. But poetry? Not so much

pretty basic, not quite poetry, but a nice thought none the less... (wouldn't we all?)

One that has the potential for improvement with a few good revisions.

Here is one part of your poem that does work:

"Not climaxing quitley (quietly) on rolling waves

You don't have to love me

I just want to be fucked"

The first line isn't bad at all. It is poetic.

The last two lines are simple, yet powerful. I'm not sure if I should feel sad that you're settling for a fuck without love, or if I should be saying, "You go girl!" because sometimes, you just want to be fucked and you're a woman who doesn't mince words when it comes to that.

Keep writing and growing. :)

It's deffinately a poem with alot of potential, and sometimes we ladies just want to get fucked and there aint no shame in that!!

Your Poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Reviews for Tuesday 1st of February.

Thanks, everyone, for your criticisms. To Wickedeve, she's not settling, she'd heeding a baser desire. Oftentimes, we all need to do so. Again, thanks all. *Super_Genius